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Heroes Community > Tavern of the Rising Sun > Thread: haiku
Thread: haiku
celfious
celfious


Promising
Legendary Hero
From earth
posted June 12, 2004 03:07 AM

haiku

5
7
5
the japaneze sylable poem style.
Try it or diet.



we die anyways
Should we care about our fates?
aslong as we die


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BoogieMan
BoogieMan


Famous Hero
The John of Spades
posted June 12, 2004 03:26 PM
Edited By: BoogieMan on 14 Jun 2004

silenced skybells melt,
for the maiden has married
the snake, in her dream
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no more purpose now
to my being. my sword rests
inside the dead beast
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will you ease my end,
cry your tears on my pyre,
kiss my lips of ash?
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my claw nears your throat.
let your warm blood absolve me
of my every other sin
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drop your robe, reveal
your pure stone body. let me
be your sole carver
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your thirsty lips search
for the last drop of my soul.
such sweet damnation ...
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there's none to save me
noone to give me something
to turn my back on
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I sing my curses,
praise my pain, welcome my fate,
dwell on my demise
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I have been falling
for so long that I will soon
start growing new wings
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my left shoulder hurts
from your thoughts' weight. stop building
temples in your mind
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Celfious
Celfious


Promising
Legendary Hero
From earth
posted June 12, 2004 03:51 PM

I took the image
I stole the ones only key
I have everything
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Asmodean
Asmodean


Responsible
Supreme Hero
Heroine at the weekend.
posted June 12, 2004 06:09 PM

Hey Celfious dude
Cool thread about haikus man.
Really good idea.
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ratmonky
ratmonky


Famous Hero
Abu Hur Ibn Rashka
posted June 12, 2004 09:33 PM

I liked your haikus,
but they are meant to describe
(e)motions through nature.

(arghh, didn't work, oh well)
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Dies illa, dies irae,
Calamitatis et miseriae.
Requiem aeternum
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Wiseman
Wiseman


Known Hero
posted June 12, 2004 09:34 PM

"I shall express my feelings through a disciplined form of Japanese Haiku poetry:

My heart aches
Because of you, I want to vomit
Die away from me "

Hyde, from that stupid show about seventies.
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BoogieMan
BoogieMan


Famous Hero
The John of Spades
posted June 13, 2004 11:28 AM
Edited By: BoogieMan on 13 Jun 2004

Quote:
I liked your haikus,
but they are meant to describe
(e)motions through nature.



Yes, that's what they express traditionally, but that doesn't mean we have to be restricted to it, does it? Any poem of the 5-7-5 syl. structure is a haiku (or at least a poor attempt in our cases )
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kookastar
kookastar


Honorable
Legendary Hero
posted July 21, 2006 10:01 AM

Slices of fried spam
Emit the scent of laughter
Volcanic Wastelands

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2XtremeToTake
2XtremeToTake


Promising
Supreme Hero
posted July 21, 2006 10:07 AM

Boogiesman story was perfect until this line

my claw nears your throat.
let your warm blood absolve me
of my every other sin

Of-my-Ev-ry-ot-her-sin

its supposed to be 5, not 7
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