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2XtremeToTake
Promising
Supreme Hero
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posted November 23, 2005 10:00 AM |
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The Chronicles of the unholy one - feedback thread
All feedback goes here, thanks.
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I almost had a psychic girlfriend but she left me before we met.
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MightyMage
Honorable
Legendary Hero
of INSANITY and DELICIOUSNESS
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posted November 24, 2005 07:21 AM |
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This isn't bad 2X. Ever since you started posting in the Glade your posts have gone from 32 useless SPAM messages a day to a couple of good posts actually worth reading.
I figured I would tell you this before I burst your bubble. From the beginning of the Forsaken installment to LHW we had stated that all of the Forsaken Ones (except Alivia) were brothers and sisters and that their mother was Motherdark. Although in the beginning we didn't have anything set in stone it grew over time. Just before that time warp that erased all those posts Gorman, Asmodean, and myself had posted in the library before we battled you and had discovered some tomes and books telling more about the family line of the Forsaken Ones. Then Dean created a thread where he was telling their story. At the same time (before I noticed he made that thread) I posted in the OOC my version which closely matched with Deans.
Basically they both stated that their birth was during a time when magic was still regarded as an act not to be messed with. This woman (I forgot what her real name was) had been gifted with magical abilities which she used to heal the sick children of the lands below. She lived in the hills because her powers scared the people. She cared for their children and they were thankful but she longed for children of her own. She was unable to have any so she decided to make some using her magic. Her husband despised magic and therefor hated the children. In the middle of the night he drug them outside and killed them. When the woman discovered the dead bodies she flew into a rage. She killed her husband and used his blood to bring her children back. Because of how she went about this, her magic came out dark and evil tainting her and warping her children. The Unholy One was the last one brought back at which point she was fully consumed in her evil hence why he came back undead. It was then she started calling herself Motherdark. She decided at that point that the world below had been ungrateful for too long so they must DIE.
That was it in a nutshell. You know the rest.
Unfortunately these were lost in the time warp. I figured that everyone had read this stuff so I and I guess everyone else never bothered to mention it again.
I'm not telling you to stop writing though. By all means continue. I'd like to see your point of view.
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Though I must still bow
in awe for the awesomeness that is
MightyMage. For he is all I could ever
want to be! - OhforfSake
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2XtremeToTake
Promising
Supreme Hero
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posted November 24, 2005 10:10 AM |
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I plan on having my character meet with Motherdark, before she even gives birth/creates the rest of the forsaken ones.
Everything will pretty much be in sync with what everyone else wrote, except my character, However, Motherdark is responsible for turning Sendon into the Unholy One, so everything will work out eventually.
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I almost had a psychic girlfriend but she left me before we met.
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