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rldragon
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posted January 11, 2006 02:49 AM |
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Snow wolf than it is 
About the rest:I don't know,your proposed changes would directly changed them back into wild brutes,btw I don't want them.Might,cool,BRUTES?,NO WAY.As for summoning magic,that would make Valkyries too powerful.
Anyway Lith thanks for suggestions.I will think about them.
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Lith-Maethor
Honorable
Legendary Hero
paid in Coin and Cleavage
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posted January 11, 2006 02:54 AM |
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brutes?
nah... that would make them lose much of the theme... i considered someone's suggestion of "Frost Knight" for the level 1... but that would make them sound too powerful for their level
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orbvius
Adventuring Hero
Oblivious
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posted January 11, 2006 03:19 AM |
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Snow wolf than it is
About the rest:I don't know,your proposed changes would directly changed them back into wild brutes,btw I don't want them.Might,cool,BRUTES?,NO WAY.As for summoning magic,that would make Valkyries too powerful.
Anyway Lith thanks for suggestions.I will think about them.
I agree with you on this. Unless valkyrie are lvl 6 creatures, summoning Berserker really makes them overpowered (unless you want to summon warriors for a change).
I think you should name your "war leader" as "war hero" instead. This will bring out the qualities of war for the characters.
War Heroes - They who are the greatest in time of war, so powerful that they invoke bloodlust of their allies and strikes fear on their enemies. Not only are they experts in weapons but also great war tacticians, thus, suited to be called a war hero as one who commands the highest honor on the battlefield.
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 11, 2006 09:20 AM |
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I will do that Orbvius except one thing,I will not give fear ability to them.
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orbvius
Adventuring Hero
Oblivious
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posted January 11, 2006 11:33 AM |
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I will do that Orbvius except one thing,I will not give fear ability to them.
Fear is only in the description, not necessary needs to be added. I'm just writing the description as an example of a "war hero". Hope you understand 
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 11, 2006 12:24 PM |
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Of course.Expect first part of history today.
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 11, 2006 09:05 PM |
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As promised here is the first part of history.I will write the whole history as story from now on.Any comments ?
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Oakwarrior
Famous Hero
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posted January 11, 2006 09:11 PM |
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Phil is a good name  Will you continue part 1? I liked the one now, anxoius for the next part  Nothing bad to say, only some grammar errors
Houston, we have a problem
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 11, 2006 09:26 PM |
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Yes,I will continue part one.As for problem,I really didn't know it,I forgot totaly 
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frakel
Adventuring Hero
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posted January 11, 2006 11:28 PM |
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I especially like your creature lineup: characteristic, thematic, balanced - and creative special abilities too!
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 11, 2006 11:33 PM |
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Glad to like it Frakel.Do you have any suggestions?
As for your town Frakel I like your town very much,but I think that you will be much busy this several weeks ahead,as many factions have done 60,70 % of their town while Beast-alliance for example has 85 %.You just have to start updating it.If you need feedback on something tell me,I will be happy to help you.
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 12, 2006 09:35 PM |
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I've just wrote new part of history,any comment?
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gwyndolium
Known Hero
Ancient citizen
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posted January 12, 2006 09:38 PM |
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I've just wrote new part of history,any comment?
I guess I should say that after a , there is a space of nothing.
And I like it the way you write it, but I choose the way I have it now because heroes V has his history so as well.
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~I came down from heavens, to bestow the people under me, with hope and knowledge~
-The angel of judgement, Gwyndolium.
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 12, 2006 09:44 PM |
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I don't quite understand your post.
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gwyndolium
Known Hero
Ancient citizen
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posted January 12, 2006 09:59 PM |
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I don't quite understand your post.
That after a comma mark (did I wrote it well? Can't find it) you need to make a space in your history.. Like this:
The tree looks nice from below, however from the top it's kind of ugly.
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~I came down from heavens, to bestow the people under me, with hope and knowledge~
-The angel of judgement, Gwyndolium.
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 12, 2006 10:06 PM |
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Oh that, okay.Well do you like my history-stories?
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joe
Tavern Dweller
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posted January 12, 2006 11:10 PM |
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history
Wow, you really have a way with words! Nicely written with humour. This town gets better everyday, it must be taking you a long time.
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 12, 2006 11:19 PM |
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Glad and happy I am that you like it.As taking much time,well,not very much time,you only need small amount of experience of writing(like I have from ubi Heroes V forum,check out fables ).I first thought of history stories when I first started to think about history and wanted to make my history interesting.So I remembered how I liked(and still do!) historical novels.
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Blitzkrieg_Boy
Adventuring Hero
The Lone Keeper
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posted January 13, 2006 04:31 AM |
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It is true you wrote an excellent story. But I must remind you though you are writing the origions of a town. If you can add that, it will be quite good.
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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted January 13, 2006 09:46 AM |
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Blitz, don't worry, I know I am writing origins of town.I will add short history when I am finished.
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