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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 19, 2008 07:59 AM |
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So far I like what I am seeing. If everybody finishes early may move the deadline up 
No please don't I'm busy in Real life now so I will finish my Character as soon as I can.
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OmegaDestroyer
Hero of Order
Fox or Chicken?
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posted September 19, 2008 08:09 AM |
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Yeah, I got some slacking still to do while I look for a job Misty. I'm counting on the the deadline as is.
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The giant has awakened
You drink my blood and drown
Wrath and raving I will not stop
You'll never take me down
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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 19, 2008 04:52 PM |
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Edited by carcity at 17:30, 19 Sep 2008.
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what happened to my character? The post it was in was deleted. I'm withdrawing cause I have ot the time to create a whole new character. with school and all. What you saw before off mine was almost the whole one.
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted September 19, 2008 06:47 PM |
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What do you mean it was deleted?
You either deleted it yourself or a Mod (but it's unlikely though) or maybe a bug... I hope it's not the latter.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted September 19, 2008 07:31 PM |
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Edited by Lexxan at 22:41, 19 Sep 2008.
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I consider my entry finished, but may Add details, edit, etc...
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 20, 2008 10:45 AM |
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What do you mean it was deleted?
You either deleted it yourself or a Mod (but it's unlikely though) or maybe a bug... I hope it's not the latter.
Check page three. It should be 2 posts above your post about that you where in my story. And I have NOT deleted it myself.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted September 20, 2008 10:47 AM |
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Maybe it's MightyMage. He once did that to me... though I doubt he would delete an entry...
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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Mytical
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
Chaos seeking Harmony
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posted September 20, 2008 10:57 AM |
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I remember seeing it, and noted that it did have Asheera in it. Indeed though it seems to be missing.
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Message received.
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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 20, 2008 10:58 AM |
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Edited by carcity at 18:25, 27 Sep 2008.
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EDIT: I decided to be in after all. I can just make a new one out of what I remember from the old one. The deadline is late anyway so there is still plenty of time  I will edit this post for the new one.
Name: Shedaw.
Race: Dark elf.
Sex: Male
Description: Shedaw is very young but he is the most skilled dark elven fighter since ages. He can't remember anything since he was 15 and destroyed an Elven village on his own. He is a silent type who only obeys two persons. One is the first dark elf he saw named Asheera Moonblood wich he feels he have some kind of bond to but he doesn't know exactly what. The other one is the dark elven leader Sinitar. He is a cruel leader who wants the dark elves to rule the world. Shedaw shares the same goal and that is why he does what Sinitar says.
Setting: Fantasy
Background: When Shedaw was born he was an ordinary elf who lived in the elven village of Haermeisny. He was born under the name of Lifes who means Life in elven language. He was a curious little elf who searched around everything. When he was 2 years old he once followed a squirrel out in the big forest. He was missing for a week. People first thougt he was dead but one day he was sitting outside his house playing with the squirrel he had followed.
After that Lifes lived a normal life until he was 4. Then he got a wooden sword and shield from his parents. All his friends had one too. They where always out in the forest fighting each other. Lifes was always winning over his friends. He ofte never got a single hit. But he and his friends never carred who won. They had fun and played.
When he was six years old his mom got sick and was in bed all the time. He did everything he could to help her and learned how to take care of her. His father explained to him that one day he would take over the house. That he would have to take care of his Mother and father when they where old and sick. Lifes then became more serious about things.
When he was 8 years old his father bought an anvil in order to make swords and shields to the village's warriors when the rumours about a war coming reached the village. He then was given a real sword and shield. He also learned how to smith things on his own. And he was one of the people who supplied the armies with weapons when his father was in an accident. One of the axe's on the wall fell down and capped of his fathers left hand.
Then when Lifes was 12 years old rumours came that the war would soon reach the village. He amonga all other young elves was trained in the art of combat. He was very skilled from the start and became one of the village's most skiled wariors from the start. All female young elves was trained in the art of magic. And when Lifes was 13 the war came. He among all other elves fought bravely and held back the dark elven forces. And the female elves was using their magic to create a barrier around the village keeping all arrows and magical attacks from coming into the village. Lifes was also ery skiled with a bow and arrows. And often killed many dark elves from affar. The elves could still shoot arrows from the inside of the barrier to the outside. The war lasted for many years and the dark elves became desperate. Most of their forces was destroyed by the more skilled elves.
One night he sent a small group of dark elven warlocks inside the village. They managed to sneak past the guards. And dark elves could still walk through the barrier. They found their way into Lifes Home and snuck into his room. One of the dark elves, a female known as Asheera moonblood took up one of her daggers and with it made a small whole on her finger. Making a small amount of blood come out. She then put the blood on Lifes mouth. He licked his lips to get it away in his sleep. And at the same moment he swallowed it Asheera's eyes started glowing in a red colour. And from her eyes came a red gaze witch leaved her eyes and came into Lifes's eyes. Asheera became very pale and fainted. the other dark elves helped her out of the village.
Skills:
Expert Melee combat.
Shedaw is an expert in fighting in close combat and is thereby deadly when it comes to fighting. Even against multiple enemies He can win without a scratch.
Expert Range combat.
Shedaw is skilled withhis bow to. He can make a shot between the eyes on someone standing 10 kilometers away.
Basic Fire magic.
Shedaw can use basic magic to aid him during his battles.
Expert stealth.
Shedaw has the power to completely melt in with his surroundings. This is a great skill to have when stalking someone.
Abilities:
Gear:
The Shadow blade.
Shedaw uses a special blade empowered with the powers of darkness when he fights. The darkness powers helps him to swing it easier and deals more damage on impact. It also curses his target with cursing magics if the target would survive a blow from this sword.
The Shield of Darkness.
The shield of darkness is a special shield designed especialy for Shedaw. It is easy to carry and shields against any attacks no matter how strong. It is also indestroyable wich means that even the most powerful blow wont make a scratch on the shield.
Dragon necklace.
The dragon necklace that Shedaw is wearing protects him against most magical attacks. It also shields very good against the breath of a dragon.
Bow of fire.
Shedaws bow is made out of the lava in the deepest pits of a huge volcano. This bow is perfect for firing long range shoots. It also makes all arrows shooten by this bow explode in a huge burst of flames on impact.
i will add more soon.
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vlad976
Adventuring Hero
Nukular Turbo Toaster
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posted September 22, 2008 08:45 AM |
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Edited by vlad976 at 11:41, 29 Sep 2008.
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(Author’s Note: Set in the Inner Sphere of the Battletech Universe)
Authorized Viewing Only
Wolfnet Personnel Report
Ren, Kevin
Full Name:
Kevin Thomas Ren
Race:
Human Freeborn
Gender:
Male
Appearance:
5'9", 176 lbs
Dark Brown Hair
Athletic Build
Tattoo: Upper Left Arm, Black Lion
Birthdate:
March 5th, 3031
Home Planet:
Ander’s Moon
Affiliation:
Mercenary, Smoking Aces (MRBC ID# 06799760)
Battlemech:
VTR-9X1 Victor
Skills:
New Avalon Institute of Science, College of Military Science:
Basic Training
Battlemech Pilot MOS
Military Science Studies with an emphasis on the Clans.
Abilities:
Natural Aptitude: Gunnery/Battlemech
Quote:
"Well that happened."
Biographical Information:
Son of Mechwarriors Taris Ren and Tank Smith of the mercenary unit, Blazing Aces. Both parents are presumed killed by Clan Ghost Bear on the planet Kaesong. Raised on the units’ base world of Ander’s Moon. Showed early interest in Battlemech piloting during rides in his father’s mech.
Received advanced education at the New Avalon Institute of Science. Scored high marks in field exercises but only slightly above average in the classroom. Graduated in the upper 40% of the class of 3054.
Upon graduation, received a VTR-9X1 Victor as a gift courtesy of the Duchess of Ander’s Moon on condition of reforming the Blazing Aces. Received full support from former members of the unit and took the rank of Captain.
The unit then signed a short term contract with the Free Rasalhague Republic as supplementary forces for a raid into Clan Wolf territory. The mission ended in a disaster. The KungsArmé forces were squashed and the Aces lost their few veteran pilots. The only positive would be Ren’s own survival and his fortuitous capture of a Clan mechwarrior (see: Radick, Janessa).
Renamed the unit to the Smoking Aces and began the rebuilding process with bringing a former House Liao mechwarrior (see: Fong, Ryan) and his mech into the unit.
Recently entered into negotiations for mercenary sponsorship with the Kell Hounds.
Evaluation:
While his ability to capably lead a unit into battle remains to be seen, there is no doubting his ability as a mechwarrior. Defeating a trueborn Clan mechwarrior (a bloodnamed warrior no less) in single combat is no small feat.
Officially, he is still in negotiations with the Kell Hounds for sponsorship. Unofficially, sponsorship is basically a done deal as an anonymous officer within the Hounds has expressed interest in Ren’s development.
He still harbors a grudge against Clan Ghost Bear for the death of his parents.
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Battlemech Model:
VTR-9X1 Victor
Serial Number:
FC449-76T
Mass:
80 tons
Chassis:
HildCo Type V
Armor:
Durallex Heavy with CASE
Engine:
Pitban 320 Extra Light
Top Speed:
64.8 km/h
Jump Jets:
HildCo Model 12
Armament:
1 Dragon's Fire Gauss Rifle
1 BlazeFire Systems Large Laser
1 Generation Streak SRM-4
2 Martell Medium Pulse Lasers
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If you are offended by words on a monitor, don't read this post.
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OmegaDestroyer
Hero of Order
Fox or Chicken?
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posted September 28, 2008 04:57 AM |
bonus applied by Mytical on 08 Oct 2008. |
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Pictures to come.
Man, oh man, rewriting 6 pages of material takes longer than I thought. Nothing like waiting until the last moment either. Anyways, here's my entry.
I created Calculina a long time ago during one of my bar review courses. I believe Commerical Paper. I should have been paying attention, but it was a subject that's never been on a bar exam in my state and didn't show up on the bar, so no worries. Probably shouldn't have doodled in my other classes though.
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Character Name: Calculina/Jane Arithmia
Race: Human
Sex: Female
Description: The Bride, Lady Arithmia, Mistress of Mathematical Mayhem.
Setting: The twisted world of Gladerion
Skills: Unprecedented mathematical prowess, financial planning, calculation, accounting, assassination.
Appearance: Chocolate silk hair, perfectly round breasts, long legs, a face stolen from Venus, and a body that could tempt the gods. She wears a tattered wedding dress stained dark purple, a large leather belt that hangs from her waist, Mr. Calculator lies at her side, and a golden amulet of a bird's skull with ruby eyes.
Abilities: Able to use Mr. Calculator to command the very essence of math, achieving incredible feats such as mulitplying a person's fortune, subtracing years off a man's life, dividing a person into several bloody pieces, and more. Additionally, due to her superior intelligence, Calculina is a master of several subjects on top of math, including finance, science, and accounting.
Bio: The life of the woman known as Calculina is an interesting and sad one. What started off as an average life became charmed and, ultimately, tarnished.
Born to a mining family in a moderately-sized mining community known as Greenstone, Jane lived a dull life. People in the community aspired to little, often relying on a job as an excavator, or as in the case of most women, an apron seamstress. Greenstone, aside from mining, was also the regional supplier of aprons and center for ettin defense research. It was at the 45th annual Ettin Defense Summit did a 9-year-old Jane discoverd her destiny.
Every year, the scholars of Greenstone would present their various hypotheses regarding Ettin defense in an arena. After a lottery, one scholar received the opportunity to test their proposed defense against a live, captured ettin. Jane’s uncle was pronounced the winner of the raffle. Boldly, he entered the arena to the cheers of Jane, her family, and the crowd. His proposal? Aprons with floral patterns were excellent ettin repellants. After explaining his reasoning (there have been no recorded ettin attacks on those wearing aprons with tulips on them), he stood before the horrendous monster, adorned in a newly sewn daisy-patterned apron. A hush fell over the crowd as the ettin was released, roaring away its guards. The hush turned into cheers of triumph as the Jane’s uncle stood up to the confused creature and proudly declared his hypothesis a complete success. Unfortunately, it was quickly discovered—the same day ironically—that presenting tulips to ettin’s was considered a grave offense and Jane’s uncle was quickly flattened by the monster.
 
Upon witnessing the ghastly demise of her uncle, Jane fled the arena as fast as her little legs could take her. Half a mile outside of town and blinded by tears, the young girl never saw the strange object protruding in front of her and crashed heavily to the ground. She cried and cried, but with everyone’s attention turned to the summit, nobody heard her pain. Nobody heard, except for the strange device.
The device offered comforting words to the wounded child, drawing strange looks from Jane. Always more curious than cautious, she approached the device and dug it out of the ground. It introduced itself, explaining that it was a member of an ancient civilization of highly advanced calculators that used the powers of math to conquer worlds… or would have had they had limbs. As a reward for rescuing it from an earthy tomb, the calculator offered to teach the young woman the powers of the cosmos. Not fully aware of what such an acquaintanceship would bring, Jane decided to keep the calculator and affectionately dubbed it “Mr. Calculator.” After wiping off the last of her tears and speaking more with the Mr. Calculator, Jane vowed to find a way to avenge her uncle by developing the best anti-Ettin defense ever.
As the years went by, Jane grew into one of the most beautiful and intelligent women in the world. Her beauty was unrivaled: hair like chocolate silk, legs that wouldn’t stop a set of emaculate breasts, a face that could launch a war, and a body that could corrupt the most virtuous of paladins. Suitors from the realms over sought her hand in marriage, yet none were good enough for the women because they couldn’t match her unparalleled intelligence. With the help of Mr. Calculator, Jane learned volumes of forbidden arcania and easily mastered the most difficult mathematical concepts, as well as every other subject placed before her. While some questioned her sanity after witnessing her speak to an inanimate device, no one dared question her advanced intelligence. Through her work, Jane was able to refine several areas of Greenstone through scientific advancement, turning the poor mining community and apron producer into an economic powerhouse. Yet Jane remained unhappy and unsatisfied. For all of the good she had done, the ettin defense loomed heavily on her mind, evading and mocking her. It wasn’t until the 60th annual Ettin Defense Summit would Lady Jane Arithmia be vindicated.
At the 55th annual Ettin Defense Summit, Calculina finally won the lottery and was chosen to demonstrate her best ettin defense. After years of study and research, Jane would finally avenge her uncle by presenting the best way to stop an attacking Ettin in front of the entire city of Greenstone. Jane proposed a radical approach to ettin defense: ettin offense. Instead of testing the best apron to stop an ettin, Jane chose the more pragmatic approach of killing the two-headed creatures. As the captured ettin was released and advanced, Jane pulled out Mr. Calculator and quickly depressed a sequence of buttons. Mystical symbols floated in the air in aqua splendor drawing gasps and awe from the crowd while enraging the ettin. The monster sprung on the poor women, inches away from crushing her with a hammy fist but Jane was faster and pushed the “=” key. Instantly, the brute was ripped apart by the symbols, showering the arena with blood and cheers of victory. At long last, Jane’s uncle could sleep well in his urn, for she had triumphed! Cheers and applause rained down on Jane as the mayor approached to congratulate her.
Then, the unthinkable happened.
While bowing before the crowd, Jane’s finger slipped and accidentally pushed the “=” key again. Instantly, the mayor of Greenstone was bathed in an eerie glow and cut into bloody chunks. The crowd was stunned. In less than 5 minutes, the heroine of Greenstone turned into one of its greatest villains. Jane fell to the ground in shock, horrified by the event. She offered little resistance when the guards circled, chained, and hauled her away.
Jane was quickly tried for the murder of the mayor.
Jane desperately tried to plead her case; that it was an accident, that her finger slipped, but the jury wasn’t sympathetic. The highlight of the trial came when Jane insisted that Mr. Calculator could vouch for her and he was put on the stand. For 2 days, the prosecutor grilled the calculator on all sorts of matters, but wasn’t able to get anything out of him. Mr. Calculator talked and screamed in defense of Jane, but sadly, nobody could understand the curious device but her. After being found guilty, the judge questioning her grasp on reality and in recognition for her various contributions to Greenstone, decided to spare Jane from execution and sentenced her to spend the rest of her days in an insane asylum. In less than a week, the promising life of Jane Arithmiaa, the gorgeous math savant of Greenstone, ended and the remains were thrown into a padded cell in Rotten Head Asylum.
Life in the asylum was Hell for Jane. The plush accommodations being a savant offered were replaced by rotten food, rags, and psychopaths. Rotten Head was home to the deranged, possessed, and others deemed too dangerous to be free, yet too vile to execute. Without the support of her best friend (Mr. Calculator having been taken away upon admittance and locked in the asylum’s vault), Jane’s genius was worthless and her body was a powerful magnet. Murderers, rapists, and monsters of all sorts took note of her extraordinary beauty. A couple tried to accost her but were unsuccessful due to the efforts of the meat-headed guards. Unfortunately, the guards were not always around and the asylum housed a particularly evil individual Hell-bent on ravaging the poor savant.
One evening, during “free time”, Jane decided to take a stroll through the asylum’s garden. The garden hardly lived up to its name, offering dead grass, animal carcasses, thorny vines, and various man-eating flowers. Still, it as outside and it was as close to freedom as Jane could ever get. The garden was also the frequent hunting ground of a serial rapist known simply as inmate #357. #357 was as sick as anyone in the asylum came, possessed by a demonic entity and convicted of 67 rapes, he was far more monster than man and continued destroying the lives of those unsuspecting in the asylum. Worse yet, #357 was the son of one of the realm’s most prominent families and money stayed the hand of the executioner, placing him comfortably in a padded cell at Rotten Head. Due to his family’s influence, none of the guards would touch #357 and let him do what he wished.
As Jane milled about the sanctuary, she was quickly ambushed by the monster and knocked to the ground. All of her screaming proved useless as the guards seldom patrolled the garden and the man-eating plant behind her just licked its leafy lips; a silent partner that would eat well for getting rid of the body. She kicked and pleaded, but strong hands tore at her rags, tearing away the wrapping covering the prize. Large tears began to swell in Jane’s eyes. All of her knowledge, all of her beauty, all of her power; everything was going to be stolen from her and there was nothing she could do. As #357 ripped the last garments from her body, a sinister grin shone on his face. He would ruin her and nobody would come to save her. Or so he thought seconds before a massive fist smashed into the side of his head, sending him flying off his prize.
Staggered, #357 jumped to his feet in rage to meet the interloper. Before him a tall, muscular inmate with an equally cruel smile on his face, stood before him and Jane. Infuriated that he was stopped before he could complete the crime, #357 lunged for her guardian but was caught single-handedly by the neck. He struggled but the guardian just laughed sadistically as he picked up a rock and threw it at the man-eating plant, causing it to gnash its teeth wildly in defense. #357 eyes widened in terror as his fate was revealed. With a flick of the wrist, he was flung into the maw of the plant and crushed by dozens of teeth.
Jane looked on in horror and relief as her assailant was eaten alive. Then she realizes she was naked and quickly pulled some rags to her body, scared of what might happen next. Any anxiety was quickly dispelled as a large hand reached for hers and helped her up. After a few awkward seconds, introductions were made and Jane learned her savior’s name: Mordred Wuheisenstoffenblock. As the two left the garden and sought new clothes, they quickly bonded and a friendship arose.
While separated 20 hours a day, the 4 hours of “free time” each had were spent in each other’s company. Mordred proved to be a caring, loyal, and dependable protector, defending Jane from other attackers and often ending their lives. Jane became a trusted companion, privy to Mordred’s hopes and plans; a light in the darkness. Eventually, their feelings for each other intensified and transcended friendship. Yet love was difficult in an asylum, so Mordred devised a sophisticated plan of escape. Desiring just as much to be free and completely in love, Jane agreed and the plan was set in motion.
The beauty of the plan was its simplicity: kill every last person standing in the way and leave. The plan had three phases. The first involved the stealing of a salad fork, which Mordred managed during Salad Night at Rotten head. For the second phase, the two had to find a way into the vault where Mr. Calculator was stored. This was accomplished by Mordred killing every guard along the way with the salad fork and ultimately threatening the clerk to unlock the vault or suffer a silverware-related fatality. With Mr. Calculator free and her powers restored, Jane and Mordred set off to find the exit and complete phase 3. Unfortunately, when the vault was opened an alarm was set off, lock down was declared, and every available guard hunted down escaping duo. Outnumbered, Jane and Mordred fought salad fork and calculator to the exit. 5 guards were permanently blinded by the small dining instrument and a dozen others were eviscerated with 3 prong swipes. Those fortunate enough not to be attacked by Mordred were soon divided into hundreds of bloody pieces and had their agony multiplied by Jane’s fury. After 30 minutes of fighting and gallons of blood, the two emerged victorious, unlocked the asylum’s gates, and left the pit behind them to enjoy their freedom and love.
Life on the outside was difficult at first, but love conquers all, and the two escapees managed to make ends meet. Jane found a job as an accountant/financial planner, quickly rubbing elbows with the elites in the bustling city the two landed in and becoming wealthy in a short amount of times. Mordred resorted to more dubious methods of securing capital, often involving gambling, swindling, and other skullduggery. With amazing effort, the two were able to purchase a comfortable house in the city’s outskirts. Not wishing to waste anymore time, Mordred asked for Jane’s hand in marriage, and with elation, she accepted his engagement gift: a golden necklace with a small avian skull with two ruby eyes. With a roof over her head, a great job, and ready to spend the rest of her life with the man she loved, Jane’s life was finally turning around. Or so she thought.
After many months of planning, the big day finally came. The wedding was held outside in a small alcove near the local forest. It was going to be a rather small affair. Jane feared contacting anyone in Greenstone, so only a few work associates and Mr. Calculator attended on her end. Mordred was estranged from his family and his work offered little friendship, so he was alone. Counting the priest, 5 people and a calculator were all that was in attendance. But none of that mattered to the happy bride. Adorned in a beautiful wedding dress, she beamed as she awaited Mordred at the altar. He mentioned he was going to be a little late, but she loved him and would wait. She waited and waited, but Mordred never came. Something was wrong. After two hours of waiting, she called the wedding off and headed home, eager to chew Mordred out for chickening out on her. But he wasn’t there. Still in her wedding dress, she marched down to his frequent haunts. But he wasn’t at any of them. She questioned his employers but they didn’t know what had happened to him. Desperately she began to question every person she came across about her lost fiancé, but nobody knew what happened to him. At the end of the day, it was as if Mordred Wuheisenstoffenblock completely vanished. Finally, after an exhaustive search that lasted well into the early hours of the morning, Jane went home and cried.
The next few months were miserable. Without Mordred, there was little happiness left in Jane’s life. Her work became sloppy and she was fired. Unable to work, the house was quickly repossessed by a bank and soon Jane was living on the streets. Still, she kept searching for him. Days slipped into weeks, weeks into months, and before she knew it, a year had passed since Mordred disappeared. Depressed and resigned to fact that he was truly gone, Jane became introverted and isolated; Mr. Calculator was her only friend and he watched as his friend lost her grasp on reality. All she wore was her wedding dress and the golden amulet. She tried to lose herself in equations and formula; stretching, bending, and breaking the arcane, attempting to expand on her incredible knowledge as a distraction.
After contemplating taking her own, wretched life, she became angry and cursed the gods for how unfair her life had become. Every time something good happened, something worse snatched it away. Her family, her home, her fiance, everything was stolen from her! No longer able to cope with all of the misery, she snapped. And fractured. Enraged, she set out to kill the person responsible for all of her misery: Jane Arithmia. It was her fault. All of it. If Jane hadn't hit the stupid key, her life would have been great. She would have never been thrown into the asylum, never would have almost been raped, and never would have fallen in love with Mordred. It was Jane's fault and she would pay. She would be erased! Realizing he was as guilty as Jane, she threw Mr. Calculator on the ground and raised a hammer to crush him. He begged for his friend to stop. He pleaded with her to think rationally about what she was about to do. At the apex of the swing, she stopped. If the calculator was destroyed, her power would disappear, without that she wouldn't be able to kill Jane. She lowered the hammer, sneared, and then picked up the device. His time would come but first, Jane had to die.
She started out by abandoning her old name. Jane was weak. Jane was a fool. Jane ruined her life! She wasn't weak anymore. Oh no, she wasn't going to be weak for anybody anymore. That moment, Jane became Calculina and set off to eliminate Jane from history. Next on the list was her old employment records, which she torched after finding them locked in a drawer by her old employer. Then she found her old house; the empty home that mocked her happiness and leveled it with a new equation. A bank representative tried to stop her but ended up having his weight multiplied a hundred times. Every so often, someone on the street would recognize her as Jane and every so often, that person would be found dead in their home. One by one, she hunted down those she met while emploeyd and sileneced them in a bloody piles of bone and viscera. Eventually, Calculina erased every trace of Jane but one: Mordred.
Her obsession to find Mordred turned into a mania and the last traces of Jane died. She transformed into a ruthless killer, murdering those who couldn’t furnish her with answers regarding Mordred’s disappearance. Her white dress, a symbol of purity, became a symbol of anger and stained purple when a group of farmers attacked her at the Frylavoie Blueberry Fest after she cut some pies using an equation. They cried "Witch!" They cried when she subtracted the skin from their bodies. Bounty hunters were hired by several powerful men to eliminate her; none returned. News of her brutality traveled like fire and soon various assassin guilds began offering her employment. Needing money to continue her quest for revenge, she accepted, and quickly fond herself enjoying contracts where she eliminated newly weds. As her rage grew, so did her success, and eventually her reputation was feared by all. It became so great, Baron Avis contacted her and she became part of his personal staff. Not only was Baron Avis impressed with her assassination techniques, he quickly learned of her phenomenal math prowess and he appointed her the barony’s chief of finance. Offered great wealth and personal assistants to help her search, Calculina agreed to the position.
Ruthless, beautiful, intelligent, and dangerously unstable, Calculina continues her search to erradicate the last piece of Jane: Mordred.
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The giant has awakened
You drink my blood and drown
Wrath and raving I will not stop
You'll never take me down
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted September 29, 2008 12:06 PM |
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When was the Deadline again?
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted September 29, 2008 01:20 PM |
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3rd October
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OmegaDestroyer
Hero of Order
Fox or Chicken?
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posted September 29, 2008 09:57 PM |
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That took a Hell of a lot longer than I imagined it would.
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The giant has awakened
You drink my blood and drown
Wrath and raving I will not stop
You'll never take me down
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AlkarRahn
Promising
Legendary Hero
Divine Arcanist
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posted October 02, 2008 11:21 PM |
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I had, and still have, a character in mind. Lack of time and motivation prevented the entry, though.
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DagothGares
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Undefeatable Hero
No gods or kings
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posted October 03, 2008 12:58 AM |
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Pretty much done, here...
made the intro a little more legible while still keeping a short summary.
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Mytical
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Undefeatable Hero
Chaos seeking Harmony
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posted October 03, 2008 06:22 AM |
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Edited by Mytical at 06:35, 03 Oct 2008.
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When this ends, it will be a vote by post type thing. You can not vote for yourself. Using the honor system here, so no exchanging votes or votes through alts, or such. A new thread will be made for the voting.
PS you have till midnight tonight to finish up, post, etc. Sorry, NO extensions...plenty of time was given. Also this thread WILL be locked after the deadline has passed.
Change of plans. HCM me your vote, and remember not to vote for yourself.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted October 03, 2008 09:53 AM |
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Has this round ended already?
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted October 03, 2008 01:37 PM |
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Ok I'll give you a HCM, after I read all those entries 
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DagothGares
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No gods or kings
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posted October 03, 2008 04:56 PM |
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Ok I'll give you a HCM, after I read all those entries
Ow, god... Why was I complaining about the avatar RPG? This is so much worse. Anyway, the less is more rule applies with me, if you want my vote!
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