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RedSoxFan3
Admirable
Legendary Hero
Fan of Red Sox
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posted November 26, 2008 03:09 PM |
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At the end of each round, if people submit the entry they received as well as their own the story compilation process will go much quicker.
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Go Red Sox!
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Card_Ximinez
Famous Hero
no
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posted November 26, 2008 03:23 PM |
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Round 1 Part 5 (By Galev)
His scream did not attract much attention, noone was near. He still saw stars because the pain. He looked up and had a sigh of relief as it seemed that that Thing did not try to follow him. He started to wonder why all these seem to happen always with him. He couldn't ponder for too long as something hit him hard on the head. It was a lemon! And the second came quick enough after the first one. Lemons flying all around him, he decided to make a creep for it.
"Why the sour face, boy?" Someone asked from above.
Round 1 Part 6 (By Me)
"What, who said that?" the kid exclaimed and looked around him, but spotted noone. "Up here,boy." The anynomous voice was there again. he looked up and saw a terrible thing: a creature half-lemon, half-mannequin was hovering above him. It had a mischivous grin in it's face and it's eyes were as green as the grass under the kid's feet. "Who-who-who are you?" he stuttered. "What, yoou don't recognise me?" the creature replied. "No. Sir!" he added, just in case. "But, boy, I am your father!" the creature bellowed and landed next to the kid.
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wtf this still exists
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RedSoxFan3
Admirable
Legendary Hero
Fan of Red Sox
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posted November 26, 2008 03:30 PM |
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You wrote Part 6. I hope you sent yours to Jiriki. Also do you have Part 5 from Galev.
If everyone could post both their section and the one they received this would go much quicker.
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Go Red Sox!
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B-E-T-A
Promising
Legendary Hero
Guess Who is Back?
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posted November 26, 2008 03:43 PM |
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Edited by B-E-T-A at 15:45, 26 Nov 2008.
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...You know, it be confusing to gather all the pieces when they get delivered randomly like this so I got an idea:
What if when everyone is finnished(or finnished with his/her part) they send it to socks aswell, so he can put them in right order before posting them?
Round 1, part 3:
“In the movement Johnny checked inside of the closet, a gigantic claw suddenly burst out and the door got slammed open. Johnny fell screaming down on the floor with his eyes closed. Johnny heard creak and scratching sounds and assumed the monster was scratching up the floor and destroying the furniture of his room. He got around on his stomach, opened his eyes and saw the shadow of the monsters claw behind him and quickly started to crawl against the open window. As he got right below the window, Johnny stood up and considered jumping out of the window to safety, when he felt something grabbing his foot.”
Hmmm...something I was wondering is how C something did it with his part. If it wasen't for the word cap I would have finnished it "Johnny turned around and saw nothing behind him, no monster, no claw holding his foot, nothing at all!"
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted November 26, 2008 03:45 PM |
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Well, this is pure chaos, I hope you'll 'compile' all parts in the main post RSF so we can see the story how it goes (for example: under Round 1 you say the participants and then post the entire story)
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Card_Ximinez
Famous Hero
no
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posted November 26, 2008 03:47 PM |
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we just need Carcity's and Jiriki's parts for the first round to be complete.
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B-E-T-A
Promising
Legendary Hero
Guess Who is Back?
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posted November 26, 2008 03:49 PM |
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O.o hmmmm interesting story development. Now we need the part with the monsters description(Carcity or whatever you called him) and the finnish.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted November 26, 2008 03:51 PM |
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Edited by Lexxan at 18:34, 26 Nov 2008.
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Round 1
Part 1: RSF
The silence was piercing. Johnny pushed the tucked in covers off of him as he sat up. There it was, his closet, sitting there innocently staring at him, waiting until he went to sleep before it opens itself letting out the monsters within. Several times he woke up in the middle of the night to the doors squealing only to have it slam shut as he rolls over to catch the prankster red-handed. He never saw it move, but he knew it did. It just had to.
Part 2: Oscarius
"A sound broke the damp silence. Johnny stared at the closet door but the sound didn't emit from it. Instead, soft steps could be heard from outside...the window. Momentarily shocked, Johnny rose from the bed and stalked to the window. He could still hear the silent, muted footsteps. Carefully lifting the hatch to check out. Johnny was relived as he saw that the muted sound had been made by that branch, again. “Fooled, as always.” Johnny thought. “Maybe the monsters in the closet is the same.” Even if he quietly said that he knew that the monsters existed. With a soft creak he could hear the closet door slip open once again. He walked over to close it. And checked inside. "
Part 3: BETA
“In the movement Johnny checked inside of the closet, a gigantic claw suddenly burst out and the door got slammed open. Johnny fell screaming down on the floor with his eyes closed. Johnny heard creak and scratching sounds and assumed the monster was scratching up the floor and destroying the furniture of his room. He got around on his stomach, opened his eyes and saw the shadow of the monsters claw behind him and quickly started to crawl against the open window. As he got right below the window, Johnny stood up and considered jumping out of the window to safety, when he felt something grabbing his foot.”
Part 4: City
The thing that grabbed his foot dragged him down on the floor and around in the room. Johnny used his free foot to kick of the thing. He got loose and jumped up on his feet and ran to the window. He was going to make a jump for it and get out. He opened the window and took out his legs. He then put the legs to the wall and jumped away just as he felt something grabbing onto his shirt. It was strong and held him. It tried to drag him back into the room. But Johnny fought back and got away. He then landed on the ground with his left leg first and felt great pain in it. He screamed and couldn't get up.
Part 5: Galev
His scream did not attract much attention, noone was near. He still saw stars because the pain. He looked up and had a sigh of relief as it seemed that that Thing did not try to follow him. He started to wonder why all these seem to happen always with him. He couldn't ponder for too long as something hit him hard on the head. It was a lemon! And the second came quick enough after the first one. Lemons flying all around him, he decided to make a creep for it.
"Why the sour face, boy?" Someone asked from above
Part 6: Card
"What, who said that?" the kid exclaimed and looked around him, but spotted noone. "Up here,boy." The anynomous voice was there again. he looked up and saw a terrible thing: a creature half-lemon, half-mannequin was hovering above him. It had a mischivous grin in it's face and it's eyes were as green as the grass under the kid's feet. "Who-who-who are you?" he stuttered. "What, yoou don't recognise me?" the creature replied. "No. Sir!" he added, just in case. "But, boy, I am your father!" the creature bellowed and landed next to the kid.
Part 7: Jiriki
The boy shivered. “I’m sorry, sir, but I’m sure you not. I mean…” the boy pointed at himself. “Do I look like you?” But the creature did not give up yet: “Well, boy, you look more like your mother.” Now the kid was completely confused, and rather scared, too. “No, this cannot be!” he shouted at the creature, which let out a roaring laughter. “Indeed, it was a joke.” The creature admitted.”But you should’ve seen your face.” And after a moment both of them were shaking in laughter and it was the begin of a weird friendship…
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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Jiriki9
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Altar Dweller
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posted November 26, 2008 05:05 PM |
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Edited by Jiriki9 at 17:07, 26 Nov 2008.
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It's not a great ending, but...
Round1, Part 7:
The boy shivered. “I’m sorry, sir, but I’m sure you not. I mean…” the boy pointed at himself. “Do I look like you?” But the creature did not give up yet: “Well, boy, you look more like your mother.” Now the kid was completely confused, and rather scared, too. “No, this cannot be!” he shouted at the creature, which let out a roaring laughter. “Indeed, it was a joke.” The creature admitted.”But you should’ve seen your face.” And after a moment both of them were shaking in laughter and it was the begin of a weird friendship…
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Galev
Famous Hero
Galiv :D
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posted November 26, 2008 06:28 PM |
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Edited by Galev at 18:35, 26 Nov 2008.
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Wow, it is my honor to fill in that last gap? Now let it be done:
City's part:
Quote:
The thing that grabbed his foot dragged him down on the floor and around in the room. Johnny used his free foot to kick of the thing. He got loose and jumped up on his feet and ran to the window. He was going to make a jump for it and get out. He opened the window and took out his legs. He then put the legs to the wall and jumped away just as he felt something grabbing onto his shirt. It was strong and held him. It tried to drag him back into the room. But Johnny fought back and got away. He then landed on the ground with his left leg first and felt great pain in it. He screamed and couldn't get up.
edit: Okay, that ending is rather crazy, but in the good way. 
I think Round 1 was a good beginning... I can't wait to read round 2.
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Incidence? I think it's cummulative!
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Carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted November 26, 2008 06:33 PM |
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sorry guys. thanks for posting my part galev. otherwise I would have posted it now.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted November 26, 2008 06:35 PM |
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Alright then Edited 
Let's post Round two then...
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted November 26, 2008 06:38 PM |
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Round Two:
Part 1: Dagoth
(Still Missing)
Part 2: RSF3
(Still Missing)
Part 3: Lex
(Still Missing)
Part 4: Oscar
(Still Missing)
Part 5: BETA
(Still Missing)
Part 6: Will
(Still Missing)
Part 7: Mysty
(Still Missing)
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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emilsn
Legendary Hero
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posted November 26, 2008 06:51 PM |
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Shutting down!
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Don't walk behind me; I may not
lead. Don't walk in front of me;
I may not follow. Just walk
beside me and be my friend.
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DagothGares
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
No gods or kings
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posted November 26, 2008 07:30 PM |
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I'm not even sure whether round two is over, yet.
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If you have any more questions, go to Dagoth Cares.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted November 26, 2008 07:31 PM |
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the spot is reserved 
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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B-E-T-A
Promising
Legendary Hero
Guess Who is Back?
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posted November 26, 2008 07:48 PM |
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Your right, cause I have not gotten any HCM with an part I'm suppose to write out from.
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RedSoxFan3
Admirable
Legendary Hero
Fan of Red Sox
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posted November 27, 2008 02:06 PM |
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An update to Round 2
Mytical said she never signed up. I guess she was just trying to make her thread noticed? Anyway, I'm actually a little disappointed on our first story.
Everyone kept mentioning a monster or closet in their post. The story usually doesn't stay that cohesive. It's supposed to change and end up resembling nothing of the original section.
Think of the game telephone.
Round 2:
DagothGares
RedSoxFan3
Lexxan
Oscarius
B-E-T-A
William
RedSoxFan3
Round 3:
Asheera
Carcity
Card_Ximinez
DagothGares
Jiriki9
Mvassilev
RedSoxFan3
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Go Red Sox!
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B-E-T-A
Promising
Legendary Hero
Guess Who is Back?
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posted November 27, 2008 03:33 PM |
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Quote:
Think of the game telephone.
Which is....?!
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Card_Ximinez
Famous Hero
no
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posted November 27, 2008 06:56 PM |
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@The Unicorn From Hell: People sit in a ring, the first one thinks of a sentence and whispers it to the next one, who whispers it to the next and so on, until the last one has heard the sentence from the second last one. They then say it out loud, and usually the message has been altered if people have misheard the message, so it often becomes quite funny.
@RSF: Yeah, I kind of agree, I tried to change it somewhat, but didn't really work out. We'll just have to try harder next time.
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