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Mamgaeater
Legendary Hero
Shroud, Flying, Trample, Haste
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posted January 27, 2009 01:13 AM |
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excellent job asheera, the only problems i had with it were mostly nwn's problems (Camera, i couldn't tell characters apart)
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MightyMage
Honorable
Legendary Hero
of INSANITY and DELICIOUSNESS
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posted January 27, 2009 07:09 AM |
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It was pretty good.
I'm going to be the annoying one who picks it apart though.
The first thing I noticed is this. It says In a World Abundant with magic
Ok, cool. First scene shows some glowing magic thing.....then a desert. Not very magical. Next, a glowing pentagram. Ok, that could be magical. And then snow. Again, not very magical (or maybe I'm just personally sick of snow).
Next it says Brave adventurers explore the dangerous parts of the realm
Uh, thanks for the info I guess? Maybe it just needs to be re-worded. As it is, it sounds more like narration in a story then something from a trailer. Usually trailers hook people by saying what might or will happen. Not what is happening now. If you edit it, change that wording to a future tense.
Same thing for the next set of words and following scenes. Instead of it saying some fall in fatal traps, perhaps it should say some will fall in fatal traps. To those who have never played or even heard of the game: Ooooh, really? Dang, sounds interesting.
The ending though? AWESOME! That worked. I loved the multiple fight scenes and then that final blast which faded to the title. Really cool.
Keep up the good work.
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MightyMage. For he is all I could ever
want to be! - OhforfSake
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted January 27, 2009 02:52 PM |
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Oh ok, I guess I'm not that good with those trailer texts
But I don't think I will edit it, since saving it is pretty much a pain not to mention uploading it again, etc. But thanks anyway, I'll keep those tips in mind for my future trailers, if there will be any.
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phoenixreborn
Promising
Legendary Hero
Unicorn
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posted February 27, 2009 03:32 AM |
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Asheera
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Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted February 27, 2009 03:35 AM |
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Oh, I deleted the source files weeks ago. I can't modify it anymore, didn't think that anybody would have expected some more fixes after this time.
Rendering it again would have been a pain as well, because of that memory issue
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TheDeath
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
with serious business
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posted February 27, 2009 03:49 AM |
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Nah don't worry better than me having 10 different projects and not finishing them
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted February 27, 2009 03:51 AM |
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The sources were using like 12 GB, sorry but I had to delete them.
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