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LizardWarrior
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posted August 06, 2010 03:38 PM |
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New Reptilian Town[downloadable]
Inspired by the first "Lizard Town",very spamfest with "ungood" ideas,i decided to make my own Lizard Town,I used fortress' reptiles and some new creatures I started work(very bored,1 week without internet,what I can do?).No wog files,everyone can add only who want(and because I don't know how to make one).It's only first version,I search a lvl 1 creature,only 1 new building,backgrounds,no internet,no lizard faces stocked on laptop,only 1 hero,but you will find stats,bios,names etc.Any help is welcome!
.......and the word who everyone love...........
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Salamandre
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posted August 06, 2010 03:48 PM |
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You mean Full download for "One building for a reptilian town 2% done", right? 
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LizardWarrior
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posted August 06, 2010 03:49 PM |
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downloadable,that means you can download somethink,right ?And I won't replace all stronghold,so it can be 20-30% ready.but all creatures ready
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Salamandre
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posted August 06, 2010 03:56 PM |
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Ok, that is looking great, but one comment:
While it is not important to write correctly in a forum, try to do it when replacing in HeroBios. Spaces please!
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LizardWarrior
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posted August 06, 2010 04:03 PM |
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spaces?-what's wrong?do you can be specify exactly where?I wrote only one biography,the mistakes can't be many.
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Salamandre
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posted August 06, 2010 04:08 PM |
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Aztrong is the founder of first lizard kingdom.He's a great strategian and a warrior with no equal.The wish of a new world made he to risk all and he formed the Order of the Orange Dragon.The key to bring the glory to his order is an union of peoples of multiple races,humans,undeads,lizardmen,gnolls,dragons....To keep all,he spent much time to learn about every race,even he learnt necromancy."
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Aztrong is the founder of first lizard kingdom. He is a great strategist and a warrior with no equal. The wish of a new world made him to risk all and he formed the Order of the Orange Dragon. The key to bring the glory to his order is an union of peoples of multiple races, humans, undeads, lizardmen, gnolls, dragons....To keep all, he spent much time to learn about every race, even he learned necromancy."
Added spaces and fixed grammar.
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ohforfsake
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posted August 06, 2010 04:17 PM |
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Is it okay, for me also to come with a version?
Aztrong, founder of the first lizard kingdom. A great strategist and a warrior with no equal. His wish for a new world made him risk everything as he formed the Order of the Orange Dragon. The key to bring glory to his order is a union of multiple races, humans, undeads, lizardmen, gnolls, dragons... To keep all united, he spent years(?) studying every race, he even learned necromancy.
I think it sounds better like this, but maybe it doesn't fit the story?
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Salamandre
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posted August 06, 2010 04:20 PM |
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I did not want to change the artist words. But to change, I would prefer:
"everything, therefore/thus he formed"
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ohforfsake
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posted August 06, 2010 04:23 PM |
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Ah sorry about that, then this is the best I can do:
Aztrong is the founder of first lizard kingdom. He is a great strategist and a warrior with no equal. The wish of a new world made him to risk all and he formed the Order of the Orange Dragon. The key to bring the glory to his order is a union of peoples of multiple races, humans, undeads, lizardmen, gnolls, dragons....To keep all, he spent much time to learning about every race, he even he learned necromancy.
Edit: Yes, at least thus have this mediaval sound to it, I think it's very fitting word actually.
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Salamandre
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posted August 06, 2010 04:37 PM |
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spaces?-what's wrong?do you can be specify exactly where?I wrote only one biography,the mistakes can't be many.
I think he had enough for now
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FCst1
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posted August 06, 2010 05:33 PM |
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Screens(hot's), please!
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LizardWarrior
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posted August 06, 2010 08:30 PM |
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thanks for correction,ortrography is killing me
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Kreegan
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posted August 06, 2010 08:39 PM |
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thanks for correction,ortrography is killing me
And on your grave we put: 'He always says that orthography was killing him but no one belive him' 
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LizardWarrior
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posted August 06, 2010 08:40 PM |
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sorry but I'm.....IMMORTAL(well,on internet)
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Hero_Of_Light
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posted August 06, 2010 10:37 PM |
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No wog files,everyone can add only who want(and because I don't know how to make one).It's only first version,I search a lvl 1 creature,only 1 new building,backgrounds,no internet,no lizard faces stocked on laptop,only 1 hero,but you will find stats,bios,names etc.Any help is welcome!
All those words were just crammed in a sentence. Priceless.
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And on your grave we put: 'He always says that orthography was killing him but no one belive him'
More like he is the one who does the killing... of the English language that is.
Nah, only teasing. It's okay but try to use translatum or something like that. It could be helpful. Anyway, good work, keep trying.
Although I don't understand why it replaces Stronghold town with pretty much the same thing as Fortress town...So that there are two of them now?
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LizardWarrior
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posted August 07, 2010 08:15 AM |
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@hero of light:because in fortress is only 1 shooter and I wanted to be a desert town,Fortress is now a gnoll&werewolf town(yeah,dogs,I think GK will be happy,he hates goblins and he don't have where to put gnolls)
I will release about 1 version at 1/2/3 days and it will be completed step by step and there will not be comments like "it will be never realese" or "I want to download this town".The next version will have(I hope) 3(or more) new heroes,lvl 1 creature,2 new buildings.Screenshoots and the new version will come today.Ohforf bio accepted .
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LizardWarrior
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posted August 15, 2010 03:19 PM |
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New changes,now replace fortress.
Un-upg line-up:
Upg line-up:
New commader will be the lizard who replaced cyclop.
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