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Herry
Bad-mannered
Famous Hero
100% Devil
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posted April 04, 2014 06:06 PM |
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Story Character Creating - More Info In Thread
So this is like the title says. this thread is made to submit your own characters that story authors might possibly use since
it's not a piece of cake to make an Original Character. On a second note, by submitting your character here you agree that you
allow story authors in the Tavern to use your Original Character. And please do not spam, i will ask mods to delete any posts
containing ANY form of spam, including funny spam, insults, lame spam, 1 phrase posts, etc.
You can also comment on other people's characters, and this is done by posting in a SEPERATE post. this is done to keep
posts in perfect order, 2 posts in a row won't hurt since they don't decrease your post count, the first post contains
the character and the second contains comments, i would be happy if you include help, fix to others mistakes and a very
honest opinion i will be EXTREMELY happy.
Also, if this is your first time making a character bio, you should consider seeing this, i used it since my english isn't
good enough for me to fully express my ideas, honestly it helped me, look here
And before you get to any conclusions, this thread is NOT made to get QPs, it was made to help story authors, but to be
honest a QP would be much appreciated.
Now i'll make an example and at the same time a usable character in stories, all i demand is credits, and the same for all
people who will make characters, credits.
Now here's the example:
Name: Herry Auditore
Nicknames: Terminator - Black blade - Gladiator Assassin
Origins: The Auditore family is a famous family among the assassins, Herry was trained when he was very young to be used to the
world's harsh environment of cruelity, he was used to the fog of greed in this world and his job is basically assassinating the
bad guys.
Apearance: Handsome, Nice, Attractive, Well-Dressed, Neat and Clean.
Height: Tall, Medium Height.
Weight and Build: A bit Thin, Slender, Strong and Mascular
Hair: Dark Red, Short, Wavy, Smooth and Dull.
Eyes: Bright Green.
Age: Young.
Character: Good natured and tempered, Easy Going, Friendly, Strong, Independant, Trustworthy, Unpredictable, Energetic
and Hard Working, Organized and Careful, Considerate, Humble, Self-Confident, Self-Conscious, Intreresting, Kind, Crazy.
Mind: Agile, Wise, Clever and Intelligent.
Weapons: Rebellion, Deathbow.
Rebellion: A Haunted sword, with a bone as the hilt and a skull with four bones behind it forming an X. Quite Powerful,
If the user goes into intense rage the soul haunting the sword takes control and the soul is quite crazy, violent and unpredictable.
Deathbow: A Black bow made out of Black-Dyed Bones, Only Users able to use Autokinesis can use it since it only powers
Energy arrows that have an intense affect on humans.
Powers: Telekinesis, Biokinesis, Autokinesis and Asterokinesis.
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted April 04, 2014 06:21 PM |
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Thank you, Herry. Without you, I never would have been able to create any fictional characters myself.
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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seraphim
Supreme Hero
Knowledge Reaper
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posted April 04, 2014 06:27 PM |
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Name: Szera
Nicknames: The white wich
Origins: Unknown. Assumed to have come from the somewhere from a cult dwelling in a desert. She never talks about it and every question is met with a stare that could rob your soul.
Apearance: Pale, Long hair, Heterochromatic eyes, black dress, white hair, clean dress.
Height: Medium Height.
Weight and Build: Skinny, thin, tall body,
Hair: White, Long, Straight.
Eyes: Left eye is green, right eye is blue.
Age: Young.
Character: Doesnt talk, selfish, egoist, strong, extremely independent, does things on her own, unpredictable.
Manipulative, careful and cautious, self-confident..
Mind: Inteligent, dark, suspicious about everybody, pessimist.
Weapons: Claw, Crows.
Rebellion: A hidden claw the white witch keeps under her sleeves. It is retractable and its aim is to attack enemies if they get up close.
Crows: The wich has a crow that follows her all the time. The crow takes notice if the white wich is in danger and attacks any enemies.
Powers: Curse(Causes the enemy to suffer from hallucinations, which destroys their mind), Putrefy(Decay), Telekinesis(Move things from afar).
Bonus:White Witch theme
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Neraus
Promising
Legendary Hero
Pain relief cream seller
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posted April 04, 2014 06:50 PM |
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Maybe this thread does not belong to the Tavern but I will post mine just for the heck of it.
Name: Zvaros Neraus
Nicknames: Blizzard-born
Origins: Hailing from the northern isles of Virdramen Neraus became a knight of the kingdom of Thirane. After he received the title Neraus renounced the lands he was granted to scour the land in search of adventure and fame. One particular feat was his retrieval of the ancient artifacts of the Dworin, deep in the forge of Talmas.
Appearance: Bearded and scarred.
Height: Average height.
Weight and Build: Thin, Decrepit
Hair: Long and Black with streaks of white
Eyes: Black.
Age: Old.
Character: Traditionalist, Foul-mouthed, Sarcastic, Zealous, Righteous.
Mind: Paranoid.
Clothing: Armored in chainmail with leather guantlets and boots, also wears fur clothes over the armor for protection against cold.
Weapons: Iceshard, Coldhand.
Iceshard: A steel longsword enveloped in ice, the hilt is made of gold and silver in a floreal fashion, the blade remains sharp as long as the wielder returns once a year to the place where it was forged.
Coldhand: An ornate bone dagger, the hilt is made of steel in a skull fashion, the weapon is always extremely cold, although it never freezes.
Powers: Some knowledge about ice magic, can withstand high amounts of cold.
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Noli offendere Patriam Agathae quia ultrix iniuriarum est.
ANTUDO
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Neraus
Promising
Legendary Hero
Pain relief cream seller
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posted April 04, 2014 07:05 PM |
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Herry said:
Character: Good natured and tempered, Easy Going, Friendly, Strong, Independant, Trustworthy, Unpredictable, Energetic
and Hard Working, Organized and Careful, Considerate, Humble, Self-Confident, Self-Conscious, Intreresting, Kind, Crazy.
Also... yep... he is humble, like really humble.
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Noli offendere Patriam Agathae quia ultrix iniuriarum est.
ANTUDO
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fred79
Disgraceful
Undefeatable Hero
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posted April 04, 2014 07:31 PM |
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what the hell, i'll play.
Name: Grackk the Raping Werewolf
Nicknames: The Raping Werewolf, That Goddamn Hairy Raping snow
Origins: Raised by rapists, Grackk was so named by the sound he made the first time he was raped by the elder village werewolves. He has passed on the tradition ever since.
Appearance: Wolven(he has gained the attributes of the werewolves that raped him, and has subsequently gained his manhood thusly); hairy; with a rapacious gleam in his eyes.
Height: 12 feet.
Weight and Build: 900 pounds. Built like a Brick ****house.
Hair: Black Fur
Eyes: Bright Green.
Age: 20's.
Character: Enjoys raping; long walks underwater; juggling live hand grenades(nobody knows where he gets these "boom rocks"), drinking poison to up his tolerance, doing cannonballs off of cliffs(werewolves heal at an very expedient rate, and can only die from weapons made of silver), snapping beartraps on his genitalia, writing literature, ballroom dancing. He tends to stare at the moon for extended periods of time, drooling, forgetting where and who he is.
Mind: Crazy as a bedbug on bath salts.
Weapons: His 2ft-long penis, his claws, and his bite.
Clothes/Armor: None.
Movement pattern: Roaming.
Favorite Pastime: Raping.
Favorite color: Moon. (Moon good.)
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