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tuapui
Famous Hero
Poetic Psycho Baby BlackDragon
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posted October 06, 2002 06:15 PM |
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Poems for the World
Here you post poems that you feel most represents your feelings to the world. It can be composed by you, or anyone else. Just remember to add the composer's name to the end of the poem.
What I feel about the world:
What utter pity this earth doth lie,
the vileness the unkempt! oh humble hearts
thine lost to time, decency and pleasantry,
too, denied. Does Thou find a pure soul alive?
Such pettyness, such defiled,
of life so bitter as the toungue.
What purpose doth thou liveth? Emptiness,
What change doth death maketh? Freedom.
Thy Nature such Beauty! Such Splendor and Life!
T'was eternity before, now ever lost it's grace.
With inventions so nearly infinite,
What loss doth bother? Uncaring this cruel world.
A child so pure at birth,
if doth liveth to the next sun,
would be defiled ever so much.
If nay, quickly doth die.
Basically It means that this world is getting very rowdy and uncaring for each other, and everyone survives only for themselves. Those who does'nt think this way see death as a means of freedom. No one cares with such comfort technology has brought us. A child that is born would either die or become corrupted by bad influence. If he is overprtected though, he will be unprepared for the real world.
What do you think?
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peractive  Do not touch.
Highly Psychotically Poetic.
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KittenAngel
Supreme Hero
Lee's wifey
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posted October 06, 2002 06:36 PM |
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This is something i wrote to my newborn son and more or less tells my feelings right now.
As you grew inside my body a bond grew that no one could break. Your my angel my every breath, to you I give thanks. As my heart pounds it is filled with the love only you have gave. My darling child please don't cry momma is by your side. Samuel I love you son!!
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Never wear anything that panics
the cat.
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Romana
Responsible
Supreme Hero
Thx :D
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posted October 06, 2002 09:37 PM |
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That is so beautifull
*crying*
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The darkest skies show the brightest stars
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tuapui
Famous Hero
Poetic Psycho Baby BlackDragon
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posted October 06, 2002 10:25 PM |
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Edited By: tuapui on 9 Oct 2002
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Some might not really get it, but we poets don't really like someone crying over our poems...Romana *shoo shoo* can't read the sign? says no crying...go little girl post a poem or don't make me angry now... this is adult stuff little girl dun understand....lol 
edit by Romana: I thought I'd put this poem of yours here too
Oh the unfaithful. Though you ask and seek reward,
and you request, but you are never fufilled.
You wonder if anyone Listens, but do you listen yourself?
Ask yourself these questions, and find the path you wish.
You have right of way, but it is my duty to guide.
Do you follow his will? ,or the commandments he gives?
Do you speak to him frequently, like you speak to your friends and family?
Do you believe in him and the holy spirit, and the son Jesus?
If you really do, then you are well. You require no more guidance. If you do not, then further question yourself.
Is this the right thing to ask?
Am I asking in any way for the benifit of myself?
Brother keep faith. Although you may not see it, he is always there to protect. Thank him for all that never happened to you, and love him for the benefits he give to you.
I deleted that thread but felt this was worth saving
EDIT: I believe that was not intended to be a poem... oh well.
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Romana
Responsible
Supreme Hero
Thx :D
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posted October 09, 2002 02:38 PM |
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well..it sounded poetic to me..take it as a compliment
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