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Tobius
Adventuring Hero
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posted March 31, 2008 09:08 PM |
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Edited by Tobius at 21:09, 31 Mar 2008.
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Time Sanctuary
Cohesiveness(4+4)=8 Though I miss more descriptions it's definitely cohesive, but more fits to the 'old' might & magic universe than the new one
Imagination(5+2+5)=12 Extremely creative approach, but sadly you adopt the Heroes 5 gameplay (e.g. creature system)
Back Story(2+1)=3 Sadfully the story is quiet weak and cannot really expand on the universe (I think you would have better chosen the old universe)
Battle Facets(5+4)=9 Great abilities, but I cannot give full points because it's still too much Heroes 5 in game mechanics (missing something like population or moulting)
Discretionary: +2 for the bunch of abilities and the town description; -1 for no emblem
Total Score=33
How I graded these:
Cohesiveness (Internal Coherence [1-5]+HoMM Compatibility [1-5])
Imagination (Creativity [1-5]+Innovations [1-5]+Originality[1-5])
Back Story (How well it expands on one of the HoMM universes [1-5]+How interesting it was to me [1-5])
Battle Facets (Variety [1-5]+Inventive Aspects [1-5])
Discretionary (Bonus for exceptional efforts[1-5])
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Fauch
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
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posted March 31, 2008 09:39 PM |
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I got above 30!! *insert happy smiley here*
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friendofgunnar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
able to speed up time
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posted April 12, 2008 07:02 AM |
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Time Sanctuary:
FriendofGunnar
cohesiveness 9/10
originality 11/15 these creatures are all unmemorable
backstory 6/10
battle facets 6/10 too many special powers. keeping track of all of them would be a fun-sucker.
discretionary 3/5
this entire faction needs to be ruthlessly pruned
35
Kookastar
Cohesiveness: 8 points
Imagination/creativity/originality/wow factor: 11 points – interesting idea however the creature line up is a bit confusing… you have used a lot of jargon without it all really fitting… hmm.
Back story 7 points
Battle facets 7 points – lots of abilities………
Discretionary: 3 – you’ve had a vision and followed it through – a lot of effort here 
Total 36
TDL
Cohesiveness(max 10) : 9
Creativity (max 10): 10
Backstory (max 10): 10
Battle Facets (max 15): 12
additional (max 5): 3
nice void city, funny creature names, very good story, although not exactly homm-like… awesome creature abilities
Total (max 50):44
Guest Judge's Score : 39.25 (Judges grades are weighed differently depending on how many factions they graded)
Judges Score: (35 + 36 + 44) / 3 = 38.33
Final Score: 38.79
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Fauch
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
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posted April 13, 2008 04:43 PM |
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what's the problem with having a lots of new special abilities?
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