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Elvin
Admirable
Omnipresent Hero
Endless Revival
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posted September 21, 2008 01:59 PM |
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Pretty good, keeps the right tone and atmosphere though at times it feels exaggerated. The constant doubt and mind games work well in building up the tension, nice 
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted September 21, 2008 04:13 PM |
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Nice story, it's really good and scary
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Mytical
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
Chaos seeking Harmony
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posted September 22, 2008 12:21 PM |
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I will join in on the spooky fun.
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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 22, 2008 06:32 PM |
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Thanks Mytical. Hope your presence in this will get four more to join 
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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 27, 2008 04:07 PM |
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come on guys. More people to join.
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Vangelis21
Supreme Hero
Manchild
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posted September 27, 2008 04:46 PM |
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it seems that noone really cares for stories. pitty. i was hoping that we would have a nice competition after all
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Vexon
Adventuring Hero
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posted September 27, 2008 04:55 PM |
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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 27, 2008 06:27 PM |
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Edited by carcity at 18:27, 27 Sep 2008.
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thanks vexon, i will add you to the list.
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Mytical
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
Chaos seeking Harmony
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posted September 30, 2008 08:46 AM |
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It started out simple. Two people going on a drive through Nevada to Vegas. Miles of desert highway, nobody for miles. They had planned it so it would take days instead of hours.
After loading up the vehicle, a old van, with all the neccessities. Food, water, a comfy bed for two, it was time for them to go. The first day of the trip was loads of fun. They sang songs, laughed, and took in all of the sights. That night, they lay the mattress out under the stars, and did what comes natural to two people in love.
The next morning, they loaded everything back up to the van. About two miles down the road, they come accross a man who's vehicle was spewing steam. It was a simpler time then, they stopped to help. Unfortunately, his vehicle was not going anywhere so they offered to take him into the nearest town.
As they rode, he become curious as to why everything smelled moldy. The van was almost brand new, and the two who picked him up were clean and neat. Yet the van stank. He decided they must have hit an animal. As they reached the gas station he got out and thanked them for the ride. He offered to pay them, but they refused. They drove off.
The man shook his head, he was suprised their were such nice people left in the world. He went inside and called a tow truck. While he was waiting, he picked up a old newspaper. The headlines read. "Tragic Death of two." The story went on to say how the bodies of two women were found next to a beat up van miles down the road. The women had been raped and killed, and the assailents were never caught. It had happened over 10 years ago that day.
The picture on the paper were the two who had picked him up.
((Bet you thought the guy was going to kill them...huh?))
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted September 30, 2008 01:32 PM |
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Quote:
((Bet you thought the guy was going to kill them...huh?))
Something like that, it was really unexpected
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