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Salamandre
Admirable
Omnipresent Hero
Wog refugee
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posted February 21, 2011 08:00 PM |
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Need drunk man english dialogs
I need a few dialogs, up to 10, about what a drunk man could say in english, and asking at every end of sentence, another drink. I am not sure how to use the english abbreviations regardless a progressive loss of fluent dialog due to alcohol. Can someone help?
The idea is him getting more friendly to the guy giving him to drink, at each dialog.
(for a WoG scenario).
So far it looks like that, but I doubt it is okay:
1) Hey KID! What's up? Have a drink for me?
2) How nice you are! Another one?
3) You know kid...more we talk, more I like you, another one for your new friend?
4) Well, my mum forgot to tell me I had a brother...where are you, come here close, another for your brother?
5) Ya 'now...long time ago I 'as a rich man...So rich, you can't i'agine. Giv' me an'ther pleease
6) ...I' as re'lly rich, and many p'ople want'd my treasure, but...! I'm not so stupid!...Come on, fill that glass ove' her'
7) But ya, I fe'l I can thrust ya. Can I?
8) ....(faints a bit)...Would ya wan' to know w'ere is it? My glass is e'pty!
9) ....'ell...l't me t'ink abo't...wh're is my rum?
10) I'll not tel' ya, why shoul' I...who 're ya anyway?
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Coconut
Hired Hero
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posted March 02, 2011 04:02 PM |
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Edited by Coconut at 16:24, 02 Mar 2011.
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This doesn't look bad at all, Salamandre. I guess there could be a bit more slang words and also swear words in here, for flavour.
Like I would have picked a word like 'pal' over 'friend', and towards the end, when he loses it a bit, words like 'bloody' and 'flamin' could become more frequent.
Maybe not use 'thrust' as a drunk version of 'trust', because 'thrust' is an existing word of its own, meaning something like 'throw' (although there still wouldn't be any misunderstanding).
Okay, I'll have a go as well:
1) Hey son, what's up? Do you wanna buy me half a pint?
2) Thanks for the drink, lad. Y'know, I could tell right away you're a good lad. You wouldn't mind buying me another one, would you?
3) Cheers son, you're a decent lad. Not many o'those around these days. C'mon, buy me'nother one!
4) 'Tis nice talking to you, you're a real pal. Y'know, you're like the brother I never'ad! 'Nother drink? It's good we met each other, wha'da ya say?
5) Can I tell ya a secret? But... promis'... don'tell anyone... Izza secret between you an'me, right? Aw... wherez my drink... My DRINK! 'Ave you gotta'nother drink?
6) Now... I know you think I'm skint, right? Y'think... I'm jus'nother poor sod from skid row... But... is not true... I made myself a fortune... a FORTUNE, pal! I've don'well... but...no... nobody mus'know where my money is! Is secret... Why's this glass empty? 'Nother drink?
7) Cheers, pal! Y'know... my stash o'gold... I hid well, y'know... nobody'll find my stash'o gold. Y'know where I hid it? ...You wanna know wherez my gold?
8) ....(faints a bit)... I will tell ya... y'know, thiz place... nobody will look... izth'last place you think... I... I NEED ANOTHER DRINK!
9) Aye... a drink... (gulp)... aww... waz'this? Waz'this bloody pish? Wherez my rum?
10) I'll not tell yah! Why? Why should I bloody tell yah anything?... Who ar'yah anyway?
Very different from yours, but that doesn't mean I thought many of your lines were bad. It's more that when I start writing I rather use my own sentences. My mind is too creative to just make minor amendments to somebody else's stuff. 
I found it difficult to abbreviate, I guess I had the same problem as you there, sorry.
Are you sure it doesn't need to be gender neutral, by the way? Since you start talking about a 'brother' in sentence 4, I used words like 'son' and 'lad', but they are not gender neutral. 'Pal' isn't too bad to use for females as well.
EDIT: I think Heroescommunity has some sort of swearword detector, that automatically changes a word in some different word when it spots one. I had to edit my original post a bit. The way it is now is safer.
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Salamandre
Admirable
Omnipresent Hero
Wog refugee
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posted March 02, 2011 05:52 PM |
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Alustor
Famous Hero
ooo da :)
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posted March 02, 2011 10:17 PM |
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what s the name of the map/mod? 
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