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MacMasterMC
Known Hero
Resurrected Loreweaver
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posted March 19, 2012 03:44 PM |
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Resurrection
...in the distant woods hangs an expectant air...silence envelops forest, hanging upon everything like a heavy mantle, muffling any noise...
...a light begins to form upon a bed of leaves and dirt...
...slowly a figure takes shape and form...one who is one with the mysteries and intrigues of the trees...
...as the figure takes shape, there is complete stillness awaiting breathlessly as the scene unfolds...
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...a shimmer in the woods, with
an expectant feel to the air...
...a figure takes shape...
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Drakon-Deus
Undefeatable Hero
Qapla'
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posted March 19, 2012 04:31 PM |
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Could I ask that you start a new choose your Adventure story from scratch, if it's not too much trouble?
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MacMasterMC
Known Hero
Resurrected Loreweaver
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posted March 19, 2012 04:36 PM |
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A new one hrm? Didn't like the one I had running? Was going to resume that one. I could perhaps be convinced to start a second one though...
I have had a few ideas...
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...a shimmer in the woods, with
an expectant feel to the air...
...a figure takes shape...
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Drakon-Deus
Undefeatable Hero
Qapla'
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posted March 19, 2012 04:55 PM |
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I stopped checking so i'd have a lot of catching up to do 
If you have new ideas I'll gladly follow
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MacMasterMC
Known Hero
Resurrected Loreweaver
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posted March 19, 2012 04:59 PM |
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You probably didn't miss much of the old one, but I will edit it so that each previous choice is not listed, to aid reading it. Additionally I have gone through and fixed a handful of typos, though it was more slight grammar errors, and changed some wordings. It flows better now, and is well worth a fresh read!
And yes, I will try to get another CYOA going as well, though I hope I will be forgiven for perhaps making it a little simpler of a story.
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...a shimmer in the woods, with
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...a figure takes shape...
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