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posted October 08, 2012 04:48 PM |
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Story in epic's reviveing the dream. A hero'es last words.
this is sometyhing in mind, a story of you will, diffrent idea to what happend after gelue's duel with kaligor.
"and the two blades clashed,a dangerous sight,explosion,errupted,magics swayed left and forth,a portal to another realm,axeoth have reopend,and meny survivers have feld there.. it is here,in axeoth,a town of new Erathia is where our story begins with a young boy,Nicolai ironfist,finding hes place in the world."
"Please lord nicoali dont leave the town,it old very dangerous times out there since the reckoning,i don't think your name has any powers.neither is mine.."
"Humphry,you bein like a father to me,alas im 25 years of age,im sick of decaying in this city,i must find my luck out there,maybe finding my parents, and proclaim my rule as king of erathia..besides rumer has it that Kastore the dark,the same one who bethroned my uncle,Archibald had also survived and made the kingdom of nekros as hes own. He must have the knowdlge of where my parents are,if they are indeed alive!"
"But nicoali Nekros is far and dangerous,plus kastore would kill you before speaking with you, what would you do?"
"I wouldn't dream of going alone.. there is a person i must seek, who knew kastore from hes days as leader of deyja , who also resqued my father from hes days inprisoned by xenofax. I must find Zoltan,the Goblin,a Black Knight!"
this is the begining lolz, bascily the idea is might be later ussable for other means. it will featured picturs of them chars there assesst looks later, too.
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Galileo
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posted October 09, 2012 06:37 PM |
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Is this going to be an adventure-oriented story (like The Hobbit) or war/politics/plotting story (like ASOIAF)?
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antipaladin
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posted October 10, 2012 07:56 PM |
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a little bit of both and a little bit of neither. 
"hmph,zoltan he lives south of here in the castle of Zhul, you'd do wise no to come too close, the goblins are not freindly."
"My father trained me in combat,and my mother trained me in startigical fighting,as you trained me in both. I remmber my lessons, I am a paladin remmber?"
"Alright then, I shall take the horse and leave at once, good buy humphry,farewell,ill return once i find something!"
"Farewell young paladin,Farewell nicolai!"
Nicolai arrived within two days to the harsh lands of Xor. a deseartly wasteland in the south. the closesit lands are in the kingdom of zhul a goblin capitol of which zoltan lives. Zoltan have progressed much since the days of harmondale. Zoltan , was one of the regent lords of Harmondale back in 1168 AS which was slightly over 50 years ago. he defeated Grognard the great and united erathian goblin tribes into 1 tribe , hes tribe,the Zoltex tribe and became the first goblin to do so since the days of Grogax nearly 200 years ago.
he established hes harsh but practicale rule ever since coming to axeoth,a goblin capitol lives of blacksmithing and merchantile of diffrent goods,as well as supply of mercenerys and armies to local lords for the right fee.
(to be continued... at thursday evning)
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Galileo
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posted October 11, 2012 09:57 AM |
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Quote:
1168 AD
You mean "AS"?
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antipaladin
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posted October 11, 2012 03:09 PM |
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I think thats how they write time in mm7... Ill confirm latter.
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Galileo
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posted October 11, 2012 04:29 PM |
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On M&M Wiki, they use 'AS' (After Silence). Even in Ignatius' (IIRC) bio in HoMM3, they use 'AS'.
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antipaladin
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posted October 11, 2012 05:53 PM |
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correctus! ill edit it. thanks,how do you like it so far then?
upon arriving there he was cought by a trap and two very fearce goblins took him,with a smashing blow to the head they captured him and took him to the castle to be presented to there lord.. not excactly nicoali idea of meeting him.
"What do we have here,a human,wake him up dogs i want to see why he was snoffing around my lands!"
"Uhm what,huh , where am i? Oh! Lord Zoltan,please,im here to see your audience! please wait! i wasnt transpassing!"
"Hmmph,why would you want that?"
as he was realised he took off hes gloves and reveled two rings,of earthian embled of gryphonheart family and enerothian emblem of ironfist family. Zoltan knew them both well.
"By the gods you are Nicoali ironfist! Realise him you dogs,bring him food and preper a guest room for him!" "i Served your family well in the past years,and they have saved my life,i'd do good to return the favor,however it will be the last time i can grant you this,tonight is late for jounry home,tomorow you should return. Now what was that audience buisness you spoke off?"
"I inteend to find out more about them lord zoltan,my parents,i miss them,and i want to reclaim the kingdom as mine! i promise you lands and power if you help me! but what have happend to that land you and your fallow lords own, harmondale i belive? tell me your storys?"
Zoltan sighed as this wasnt talked about freqntly..
"We won the land by a contest , we thought we are winning land fame and what not,but we didnt, we lost in the politics... troubled fallowed where ever we went.. we cleard the goblins there,defeated grognad , i united the clans later, we fixed it by the dwarfs and then the problams started: earthia and avlee nearly went to war,humanes and elfs silly politics made us quarrel, we made a promise to alexis that we will never side in it.. oh alexis ..how pretty that dammn elf was,she was the prettiest woman i've set my eyes upon" he lounges into memmories.
"But we didnt .I didn't and i took raynold with me,Raynold was a veteran archer from eneroth. me and him took a job of resucing loren steel for erathian queen,your mother from the elfs. the job seemed easy,but we ware betrayed,they ware tipped off and ambushed us in the exit,raynold died by the same one he was trying to save..Sareena couldn't revive him,no metter how hard she tried he was gone for too long. He was dead. Alexis never forgave me. to this day i belive.
if you will find her alive,and get her to forgive me ill support you in all of your couses! but for that.. you'd have to travel there.."
Nicoali ponderd for a minut before agreeing.
"I shall find her, where was she last sighted?"
"i heard she was on the brinch of the elfish kingdom to the north,find her for me,but it wouldnt be easy, as they are at war with the dark elfs from jademe,a small but fearce enemies of they'res.. henchman,call xora."
"This is Xora,my doughter , she will acompony you in your jounry for you must not go by yourself. she is a competente rouge and a fearce minded woman. bring her home safe for she is also hasty and sharp tounged!"
nicolai saw what he thought the most prettiest woman alive,tall strong fearce and a glowing smile nicoali felt a cringe in hes heart and fever at the same time,he didn't knew how to handle himself well with women...
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Galileo
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posted October 11, 2012 06:10 PM |
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Well, as basic idea, it's good. However, it should have more details about what has happened between Reckoning and this time. Did Nicolai live "incognito" (nobody knew it was him), and such things. (Sorry if I am cruel to the characters, but if everybody knew that was Nicolai and he wasn't king, he would've been murdered because king/s of new human kingdom/s would very likely see him as a threat.)
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antipaladin
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posted October 11, 2012 06:24 PM |
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im pretty much uninexpearnced with it, but i will explain its like a story explains itself intime...
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Galileo
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posted October 11, 2012 06:42 PM |
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Ok, then. I'm waiting for next. 
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antipaladin
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posted October 28, 2012 08:29 AM |
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Sorry for no update, had no pc time...
She was goregus in every scence of the word for our young friend she apearrd as if devinity itself have bestowed itaelf upon him it took him a couple a minuts to gather his thoughts as she startled him by gatching with hes gaze.
"whats the metter cat got your tunge?"
"hmmph what no i was just admiring your blades yeah thats it,your daggers are very, uhm,unique!"
"oh those little babies? Crafted them myself, cresent like shape allows me behade the opponents while sharp tip makes it easy to eviscireat them if such need arises!
I'd heard alot of things regarding your herittge id sure we can help each other well in our journey, just make sure you catch up,nicolai."
She said with a smile..
Very bussy time so sorry for short update...
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