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Sir_NaTuz_III
Adventuring Hero
Water Unicorn Knight
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posted August 01, 2003 11:58 PM |
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ŋCan i say somthing?
If this work to you as comfort ,i writed worst poems. many people have writed worst poems.
And,well,you poem,we cant say that is good,but it ISNīT BAD
The poem "Crescent" was liked my (a idea: erase the part of his loved demon-elf or make another poem of him), it make me feel hope.
I never can run to the battle screaming "FOR ALICIAAAA!!!!" and i neither cant run screming "FOR THE MIGHTY AND NOBLE UNICORN!!!!!" because i cant kill in name of my god.
Now i can charge saying "FOR THE CHILD OF THE MOOOOOON!!"
And i think that you can make poems but try with this : dont describe a persone or thing, describe a felling that you are felling in that same moment.
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Mi corage es mi espada.
Mi fe es mi escudo.
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Lith-Maethor
Honorable
Legendary Hero
paid in Coin and Cleavage
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posted August 02, 2003 02:30 AM |
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just me two cents...
you should follow Romana's advice and post all poems in one thread (one that can be easily maintained by us mods if needed) ...not a big fan of poetry... unless of course it is Kabadias
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You are suffering from delusions of adequacy.
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sniper
Known Hero
Dark paladin of Deyja
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posted August 02, 2003 12:59 PM |
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You want poetry??? here is poetry:
The ballad of a Death Knight
I am cursed...
And blessed with
Eternal life, and death who
Maintain my weary soul.
Darkness shines upon me,
When i lead my armies to war
When finally i succeed
I am not rewarded for my deed.
I am undead
I dont need simple plesures and rewards,
Only my shields and my swords...
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You only see me once..
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