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Rage08

 
   
Famous Hero
Making it in the real world
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posted October 25, 2005 08:18 PM |
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Do you have more material that you are ready to present RSF?
Or would you like to discuss your first parts in more detail...
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RedSoxFan3

     
     
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posted October 25, 2005 09:12 PM |
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I want to give the piece by TA a critique before I give anymore stuff of mine.
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MightyMage

    
     
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Legendary Hero
of INSANITY and DELICIOUSNESS
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posted October 26, 2005 07:22 AM |
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Back when we were doing the whole forsaken war part of LHW I had wrote my own version of how Motherdark and her children of evil came about but then I saw Dean's and decided against posting it. If I can find it on my PC perhaps one of you would be interested in reading it. It's mostly narration but I thought the story was kinda good.
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Though I must still bow
in awe for the awesomeness that is
MightyMage. For he is all I could ever
want to be! - OhforfSake
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Rage08

 
   
Famous Hero
Making it in the real world
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posted October 26, 2005 11:13 PM |
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I have no problem with commenting on TA's story...
But I can't seem to get the link to work...
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Shadowcaster

    
    
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Shaded Scribe
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posted October 27, 2005 12:07 AM |
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Right click on the link and go to properties, then remove the heroescommunity.com part of the link. It should work then, and I have no idea why HC does this to its links.
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RedSoxFan3

     
     
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posted October 27, 2005 02:27 AM |
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The Purist by Titanium Alloy
You have to include http:// in your url address or it will do that for some reason.
The Purist by Titanium Alloy
Click quote reply to see the difference.
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Rage08

 
   
Famous Hero
Making it in the real world
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posted November 22, 2005 06:20 PM |
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Edited By: Rage08 on 22 Nov 2005
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I really like the piece you wrote TA...
The way you worded everything was very unique and made it interesting to read. You have a certain way of focusing on important ideas in a story to emphasize the significance of them. In other words, I knew clearly how all characters felt and I knew exactly what was happening in the story, so that there was no confusion. Also, it is worth mentioning that you still maintained a certain amount of suspense even though you made everythng very understandable.
As for the story itself... I really liked how you made the central character someone that was different. Someone that saw through the whole Purist idea and realized how evil the plan was. And, of course, you gave valid reasons for this character to feel that way. Not to mention, he was considered a Purist himself and still felt strongly against the idea.
In conclusion, I really enjoyed your writing and hope to read some more of your material...
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TitaniumAlloy

    
     
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posted November 23, 2005 10:10 AM |
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Thanks!
I'm glad there was no confusion, I was beginning to doubt the clarity.
I'm glad you liked it.
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Rage08

 
   
Famous Hero
Making it in the real world
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posted December 14, 2005 11:45 PM |
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RSF... do you have the next part in your story to post?
If there was anyone else that wanted their writing to be looked at then just let me know...
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