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rldragon
Known Hero
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posted February 06, 2006 07:44 PM |
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Ok, Gwy, here is my rating:
Race:9(excellent)
History:6(I had much difficulties in understanding history)
Creatures:8(very good)
Balance:7(some creatures are... unbalanced)
Originality:9(excellent)
Total score: 39 of 50.Hope you like it.
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phoenixzs
Adventuring Hero
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posted February 06, 2006 08:02 PM |
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Race: 7
History: 7
Creatures: 6(Its still a complete mystery how squids,ocean and other stuff walk the earth)
Balance: 6(some creatures are weak,some have unbalanced abilities;hypnotise?)
Originality:7(The squid and some other stuff is not so original but still ý found the inner town concept very original)
Total:33/50
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kookastar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
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posted February 07, 2006 11:44 AM |
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Race 9
History 7
Creatures 8
Balance 7
Originality 9
40/50
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Aculias
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
Pretty Boy Angel Sacraficer
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posted February 08, 2006 08:39 AM |
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Hello Gwyndollium.
Sorry for the bad news but this is how i did.
Lets start with Race.
Race-8 I like how you evolved the sea around them. Racialwise it's in extent. Not a very agressive race but strong enough to hold thier own. You have a good imagination on using the myth of the ancient city of Atlantis.It seems more to the structures then we really need in a heroes game.
Balance-4 Alot seems differnet.Ocean Whisperer is not really nessary.Theres ways to getting info on your oponent without using a special structure.
So thats unbalance on your own part.
Mystic Lab can be very unbalance for those who have played heroes 4. Theres potions that is crazy for the game & I dont think heroes 5 will have them.
The sea & Ancient turtles with a massive Def & hardly any movement is very unbalance, if it's for the player or the oponent i guess it depends on whos side your on.
Kelpies & thier upgrade eating creatures on a lv 4 is very unbalance to me i think.
I did not read anythang about the heroes.
Creatures-6 Theres some good creatures I liked but theres some I just cant get into like the turtles.
I love turtles but not good for the game.Kelpies are just too powerful.
History-7 It was brief but to the point.
Originality-4 Well I would rather you used some original Imagination more then using an ancient city.
Using a Castlevania (SOTN) creature for a 7th lv is not that original.
I see alot of copycatting.
Your score is 29, sorry for the low score & good luck in the contest.
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Gnoll_Mage
Responsible
Supreme Hero
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posted February 09, 2006 03:07 PM |
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FriendOfGunnar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
able to speed up time
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posted February 10, 2006 12:30 AM |
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Atlantis
Race( 4+2 )=6 I like the mermaid and merman idea but it’s not really compatible with the land based warfare of HOMM5 (plus whirlpool and others)
History(2 + 3)=5
Creatures( 5+5 )= 10 This is the best aspect. I liked all the creatures,
Balance(3 +5 )=8
Originality=7
Total Score=36
How I graded these:
Race (Originality [1-5]+Compatibility with HOMM5 universe[1-5])
History (How interesting is it to me [1-5] +Compatibility with HOMM5 universe [1-5])
Creatures (Originality [1-5] +Internal Consistency [1-5])
Balance (are the special skills inventive [1-5] + Does it have a variety of flyers, shooters, walkers, spell-casters [1-5]
Originality (all the originality scores added up and divided by two. This means that creativity counts twice. [1-10])
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BoogieMan
Famous Hero
The John of Spades
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posted February 10, 2006 03:51 PM |
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Race: 6
I don't think I'm being obtuze when I'm saying that it's not going to work. Lizardmen coming to land is one thing, mermaids is so and so, but squids, sea monsters and turtles fighting on land just doesn't get my vote. A bonus for the town description.
History: 4
Inconsistent and with little relation to the history of Ashan. Why did the mermaids attack their creator? How could they have become so strong as to overthrow a king in just 1 year? A 900 year gap in the history.
Creatures: 6
Just a collection of sea creatures thrown in together without a solid link between them.
Balance: 6
Has some issues. The Scylla upgrade, losing its Ranged to get a 3 Headed attack, seems like the type of upgrade nobody wants. The only flyer is a spellcaster, probably weak in melee.
Originality: 5
Lacking.
PENALTY -1 for not having hero unique skill and specialties
TOTAL: 26
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Valeriy
Mage of the Land
Naughty, Naughty Valeriy
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posted February 23, 2006 09:56 AM |
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by ThE_HyDrA
Race: 8
History: 6.5
Creatures: 8
Balance: 8
Originality: 9
Total: 39.5
Comments: Excellent development of an underwater race. The racial abilities are apt and quite balanced. The lack of a spellcaster in the creatures section detracts from both sections slightly. Very original creation, and the list of creatures are very well assimilated with the history and superbly varied. Balance can’t be awarded further since there weren’t any statistics provided. A big gap in history where nothing happened, could have been developed further. Overall, a great effort.
Visitor Rating Average: 35.2
TOTAL: 75
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