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Lord_Evil
Famous Hero
Evil lolcat
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posted September 25, 2007 04:18 PM |
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my own faction
the Pyramid factin
Facts and Traits:
the hero will be called Pyromancer and the reciall skill will be pyromncy. the creatures will be mixt up like Academy
Associated Colours: White, black and sand yallow
Worship: Alena, Daughter of Sylanna and Primordial
Core Philosophy: Give and Take
Motto: "Protect the Desert and the Desert will Protect you"
Country/Kingdom: All the Deserts in Ashan
Capital City: Derlazet "Tomb of the Gods"
Key Symbols: Piramid Hexagram
Creatures
Lv1.Bandit>Sand Raider>Nomad Dwelling:Bandit Tents>Bandit Camp
A:2>2>2
D:1>3>2
DM:1-1>1-1>1-3
IN:10>10>10
S:4>5>6
HP:5>9>9
INC:15>20>25>35
G:50>60>60
Lv2.Panteres>Taigeres>Liones Dwelling:Cat Savana>Cat Oasis
A:3>4>4
D:4>5>4
DM:1-3>1-4>1-3
IN:13>10>13
S:6>5>6
HP:15>22>20
INC:5>7>10>12
G:100>160>160
Lv3.Scorpion>Sand Lurker>Sand Leaper Dwelling:Scorpion Caves>Scorpion Tunels
A:6>8>7
D:4>4>8
DM:2-5>3-5>2-6
IN:7>8>9
S:5>3>8
HP:15>20>25
INC:3>6>10>12
G:120>180>180
Lv4.Cursed Dead>Mummy>Pharon Dwelling: Piramid>Piramid Ruins
A:5>7>8
D:5>7>7
DM:4-6>4-7>6-6
IN:7>8>8
S:2>3>2
HP:25>30>35
M:0>20>20
INC:4>8>10>12
SH:0>0>15
G:300>340>340
Lv5.Desert Beetel>Beetel Pharon>Beetel King Dwelling: Beetel Piramid>Beetel Tomb
A:10>16>15
D:12>15>15
DM:8-12>10-15>10-17
IN:10>10>10
S:5>5>5
HP:40>55>60
INC:3>5>7>9
G:600>800>800
Lv6.Sphinx>Stone Sphinx>Royell Shinx
Dwelling:Sphinx Shrine>Sphinx Statu+Sphinx Nose
A:12>13>20
D:7>30>20
DM:10-20>10-20>10-25
IN:11>10>11
S:5>6>7
HP:100>100>110
INC:2>3>4>5+1
G:800>1700>1700
Lv7.Setti>Son of Set>Anubis Dwelling: Hell Gate>Underworld
A:26>33>30
D:26>28>30
DM:30-60>40-60>30-70
IN:14>14>14
S:6>6>6
HP:170>200>210
M:0>10>13
INC:1>1>1>2
G:3000>5000>5000
Sulfur:1>2>2
abilities:
Lv1.
Bandit:
Still:
After every battel you get 2 gold for every Bandit in hero army.
Sand Raider:
Sand Huf:
On sand battel ereas the Sand Raider will get 1 to all stats.
Nomad:
Bash.
Lv2.
Panteres:
Agility
Taigeres:
Agility,Seduce
Laiones:
Laion Bravery: this units moral cant get lower then 2 but not higher.
Lv3.
Scorpion:
Poison Attack
Sand Lurker:
Poison Attack,Sand Comuflage: this unit gets +1 to Defense and Speed on Sand battel ereas,Dig: Once per battel the Sand Lurker can get undergrund, he can not be attackt and he is immunity to lightning but eart spells are doing dubell damage.
Sand Leaper:
Poison Attack(+Leap),Leap.
Lv4.
Cursed Dead:
Undead,Cursing Attack.
Mummy:
Undead,Caster(Dicey M10,Suffering M6),Cursing Attack.
Pharon:
Undead,Caster(Raise Dead M10,Phantom Phorse M10),Shooter.
Lv5.
Desert Beatel:
Dig.
Beatel Pharon:
Undead,Call of the Beetel: Casts Wasp Swarm on all enemys (10 damage per Beetel Pharon),Large Creature.
Beatel King:
Dig,Dubel Attack,Large Creature.
Sphinx:
Flayer,Lage Creature,Sphinx Ridell: Once per battel the Sphinx can give a ridell to one of the enemy troops, if the enemy is wrong a curse will be cast on the enemy army or bless on the heroes army but if the enemy is right the exact oposite will hepend, the Sphinx in the stack the more harder the ridell.
Stone Sphinx:
Flayer,Lage Creature,Sphinx Ridell,Stone Skin: all melee attacks deal only 50% of the damage.
Royell Sphinx
Flayer,Lage Creature,Strike and Return,Sphinx Ridell.
Lv7.
Setti:
Teleport,Lage Creature.
Son of Set:
Teleport,Lage Creature,Caster(Curse of the Nethrworld M10,Sarrow M10)
Anubis:
Teleport,Lage Creature,Caster(Curse of the Nethrworld M10,Devain Vengens M10)
skill
Pyromancy
Basic: All of hero troops are gting 15% addition fire damage.
Advanse: All of hero troops are gting 20% addition fire damage.
Expert: All of hero troops are gting 25% addition fire damage.
Ultimet: All of hero troops are gting 35% addition fire damage.
Pyromansy:
Fist of Fire: Hero gets the Pyromansy addition fire damage.
Mark of the Fleme: The hero is eibel to plece the Mark of the Fleme on an enemy unit, all shuters in hero army will dill dubell fire damage to this unit.
Fire Sead: The firs unit thet the hero attack (not icluding spells) will be marked bay this abilitie untill the hero will attack anoter unit, when the unit dies its body will exploud 3x3, damaging all units in this aree.
Lord of the Flemes: Heroes army are immunity to all fire spells, attack or abilities(Counterspell,Treapell Catapult,Phonix Rebirt).
Attack: Flaming Arrows(Archery,Mark of the Fleme),Fire Fury: Evry time a unit deis from the hero army a rendomaized frendly unit gets special abilitie.(Cleav,Warding Arrow...)(Revenge,Flaming Arrows)
Dark Magic: Dark Light: The hero is eibel to moov at is oponens turn, but if he moovs at the oponens turn he canot moov or buld at is turn (Fire Resistense,Winds of the Desert,Master of Maind).Revenge: The hero can cast the Bloodlust spell at advense level, once the hero cast the spell the frandly unit gets an unholy damage addition, the damage adition depense on the Pyromancy level(Dark Light).
Defense:Last Stands(Protection),Fire Shaild: All creaturs in hero army get the abilitie Fire Shaild, the fire damege depense on the Pyromansy level(Fire Sead,Last Stands,Protection)
Destructive Mgic: Cold Fire: Hero army gets an addition cold damage, the damage addition depense on the level of the pyromancy(Master of Ice,Master of Fire)
Enlightenment: Wizards Reword(Intelligence). Fire Wistom: Hero gets +3 to spell power for evryfire spell thet owned bay the hero(Wizards Reword).
Leadership: Majestic: All enemy creaturs will get -1 to moral(Diplomacy).
Light Magic: Eternal Light(Master of Abejution),Fire Resistense(Eternal Light)
Logistics: Snatch(Pathfinding),Winds of the Desert: Wen the hero fights on sand terrain enemy shuters will allweis heve reinge panelty(Snatch)
Luck: Fire Luck: There is a chense to summon more fire elementals(Soldier's Luck,Phonix Rebirthe),Lucky Sphinx: There is more chanse for a harder ridell to the enemy(Fire Luck).
Sorcery: Erratic Mana(Mana Regeneration),Counterspell(Erratic Mana)
Summoning Magic: Fire Wariors(Master of Conjuration),Phonix Rebirthe: The Summoned Phonix gets the abbility rebirthe, but the spell cost 20% more each time you cast it(Fire Wariors,Fire Resistense)
War Machines: Treapell Balistra(Balistra),Treapell Catapult(Treapell Balistra).
Hero Stats:
A:1
D:0
S:2
N:1
Stats Leveling:
A:25%
D:15%
S:30%
N:30%
Village hall Bandit TentsTown hall.....
tavern
FortSphinx ShrineSphinx NoseCitadel...
Magic GuildPiramidDesert TombSpaier of Fire
Blacksmith
Shipiard
Cat SavanaBlood Lake
Scorpion CavesBeatel PiramidHell Gate
Tomb of Alena(Grail)
Market(Sulfur +1)
Desert Tomb(Castel Bettels only): If a creature (yours or of the enemy) dies it transfoms into a netural Cused Dead, if after the bettele the Cursed Dead unit stack remeinse it will join the winner.
Blood Lake: the hero can screfais is troops to retorn mana or Resurrection is dead troops from is last bettele.
Spaier of Fire: Adds 5% to Pyromansy skill.
Heroes
Alazar
King of the Beasts: Specialast in Panteres, All Panteres,Taigeres and Laiones get +1 to attack and defense for evry 2 levels of the hero starting on the firt level(Attack,Tactic).
Eris
Beatel Qeen: Specialast in Beatels, All Desert Beatels,Beatel Pharons and Beatel Kings get +1 to attack and defense for evry 2 levels of the hero starting on the first level(Summuning Magic).
Aragorn
Cold Hart: All fire spell heve addition cold damage and all water/ice/cold spells heve addition fire damage the cold damage and fire damage addition depense on hero level(Destroctiv Magic,Master of Ice)
Drazel
Hipnotaizer: All mind-affecting spells are more effective, also the mind-affecting spell thet owned by the hero are geting +1 to spell power for evry 3 levels of the hero(Dark Magic,Master of Mind).
Orlando
Pyro Treiner: Heroes army will get addition Pyromansy damage 0.1 for evry level of the hero(Fist of Fire,Attack).
Faull(Campaign Hero)
Lord of the Desert: All creatures thet are on sand terrain more likly to join this hero(Leadership,Recruitment).
Maratix
Flaming Shots: There is a chense thet shuters in hero army will meke a range relation the chanse depense on hero level(Mark of the Fleme,attack,archery)
Artix
Holy Shaild: Each time the hero casts a light magic spell on a friendly creature, there is a chance that the Endurance spell spell will be cast freely upon the affected unit, the spell level depense on the light magic mastery(Basic Light Magic).
History
390 YSD: The Wizard Descoverd the Rakshasa
After the war the wizards decaided to explore the desrt for new discoveris, as they faund the Rakshasa.
411 YSD: Age of the Pyromansers
Not long after the wizards descoverd the Rakshasa some of the explorers and more cirios man decaided to abendon the silver citys and sirch the desert for the lore of pyromansy.
500 YSD: Alena was Bornd
After Alena was bornd her ciriositi led her to the desert discaisd as a yong girl.
510 YSD: The Godes Alena
After a 10 short years Alena was succesfull in evryting, crafting sphinx, Reanameiting Dead, Pyromnsy and eaven growing plants in the desert, peapol started to sea her as a godes, Alena decaided to rvil her true identety, after they started worshiping her she saw the Rakshasa for the firs time, so she decaided to creaeite sometyng more biutifull as it was the laiones the tigeres and the panteres, after the Pyromansers saw the biutifull cat wumans they decaided to sell the
Rakshasa to the wizards as sleves.
720 YSD: The Necromanser sea Alena as a Godes
The Necromansers allay the Pyromansers.
800-822 YSD: The Wizards Imprision Alena
The Wizards sea the Pyromansers as enemys after they allayd the Necromansers, the wizards now the they didnt got a chanse to win the wor wen Alena is walking on the face of Ashan, So they decaided to imprision her in a magical chember thet is a tomb. And then the war got eaven worse as the wizards inveided Heresh but luckly the pyromansers was protectet by the desert and the spirit of Alen.
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Daystar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Back from the Dead
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posted September 25, 2007 10:38 PM |
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Awesome! This is a great faction, with lots of work put into it!
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How exactly is luck a skill?
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roy-algriffin
Supreme Hero
Chocolate ice cream zealot
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posted September 25, 2007 11:36 PM |
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ok fair fair enough, but isnt seduce on a tier 2 a teensy bit too powerful?
Oh and technically your tier 7 will hurt most of your troops including himself
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"Am i a demon? No im a priest of the light! THE BLOODY RED LIGHT"
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Daystar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Back from the Dead
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posted September 26, 2007 12:38 AM |
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I think a lot of the troops are undead, or CotN doesn't hurt this faction either.
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How exactly is luck a skill?
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Moonlith
Bad-mannered
Supreme Hero
If all else fails, use Fiyah!
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posted September 26, 2007 12:59 AM |
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Hmmm, I like the egyptian style, and there are some very interesting new abilities in here, such as the bandit's steal trick.
The sphynx's riddle is just too unpracticle though.
But what I find lacking most is a clear main race for this faction. What main creatures are actually leading it? Because in this sense it resembles the H3 monsterly Dungeon a lot, but in my opinion Egyptian culture would be more controlled and orderly.
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Lord_Evil
Famous Hero
Evil lolcat
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posted September 26, 2007 08:58 AM |
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Ok i edd the skill i hope you like it
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roy-algriffin
Supreme Hero
Chocolate ice cream zealot
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posted September 26, 2007 09:33 AM |
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Yes i like the idea but they all seem a bit disorderly really, feels like you might want to change some skills though, Some of your skills are interesting, but getting into a situation where you want to summon a pheonix and you have the rebirth skill and it costs 70 mana is a little mean , maybe give it rebirth skill but its only affected by half the spellpower?
By the way maybe you can do what chance of what stat do they get on level up? like
30% attack
20% defense
30% knowledge
20% spellpower
and so on
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"Am i a demon? No im a priest of the light! THE BLOODY RED LIGHT"
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Lord_Evil
Famous Hero
Evil lolcat
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posted September 26, 2007 10:28 AM |
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Good ideaia i will start right now but the bildings and the ohter stuff i will make laiter as i allweise sey
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Orfinn
Supreme Hero
Werewolf Duke
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posted September 26, 2007 12:25 PM |
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Very nice proposal there  A bit hard to follow through with your spelling, but who cares. Practice makes perfect 
I would especially love to see panthers in a heroes game! Or puma or jaguar! Big cats are neat, especially the black cats but I dont mind tigers either. Also the egyptian theme is interesting...It clearly adds something to the alredy existing culture links each faction have from before, like fortress have norse inspiration, sylvan indian/native american inspiration and so on.
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Duncan
Famous Hero
The Pathfinder
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posted September 26, 2007 01:29 PM |
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Edited by Duncan at 13:57, 26 Sep 2007.
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Hi Lord, I'm also new here, but you've done a lot better than I am with this contribution
My comments:
1. Pardon my noobish question: can you (or anybody) explain, why are there 3 creatures in each level instead of 2? The latter = renegades?
2. What is seduce?
3. You only have 1 shooter, each faction usually has 2 except the Infernos but compensated by the chain shots. You may want to also add the stats with number of shots.
4. The Pyromancy skill should be unique and true to this racial. Additional fire damage seems too standard and more like artie-kind of enhancement (Phoenix Feather Cape brings additional 50% fire damage).
5. I agree that Sphinx riddle during the game isn't pratical. Just imagine in a real battle you have your enemy asking you a riddle and add "... if you're wrong I'll curse you" then you'd probably go "No thanks, I'll just strike you right now!" 
5. Yes, I love the tigers! Reminds me of the white tigers in HOMM4.
7. I hope this faction somehow can avoid the association of Egyptian = undead
Overall, I agree the idea is good and innovative.
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Lord_Evil
Famous Hero
Evil lolcat
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posted September 26, 2007 01:40 PM |
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whay there are 3 creatures in each level?
alternative upogreids, new in Traibs of the East expension.
what is sedus?
new abilitie in TotE
and the sphinx riddel is not optioned in bettel or more specific if you dont ansure the curse will be cast otomatecly
also Panteres,Taigeres and Laiones are half human half Panter,Taiger or half Laion and there is addition damage to the Pyromancy: Cold(Destroctiv Magic) and Unholy(Dark Magic).
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Lord_Evil
Famous Hero
Evil lolcat
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posted September 26, 2007 04:51 PM |
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so what do tink abaut the bilding
BTW: i organaizd the bildings
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baklava
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Mostly harmless
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posted September 27, 2007 09:54 AM |
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Great! I haven't seen an Egyptian faction in a while... And this one seems awesome. Ok, some things are impractical or weird, but who cares? It's cool anyway, and that's the main thing
If you want I can correct your spelling mistakes.
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"Let me tell you what the blues
is. When you ain't got no
money,
you got the blues."
Howlin Wolf
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Lord_Evil
Famous Hero
Evil lolcat
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posted September 27, 2007 09:59 AM |
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Quote:
If you want I can correct your spelling mistakes.
thenks but it is realy alot of work to fix my spelling mistakes so i dont want to bug whit thet
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Visz
Adventuring Hero
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posted September 27, 2007 06:31 PM |
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Sounds great!
I like a faction in Egyptian style
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Homer171
Promising
Supreme Hero
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posted September 28, 2007 09:33 PM |
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Not that it would be perfectly balanced but still good work i must say
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Don't be too proud of this technological terror you've constructed. The ability to destroy a planet is insignificant next to the power of the Force.
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Lord_Evil
Famous Hero
Evil lolcat
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posted September 29, 2007 07:29 AM |
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unforchenetly i didint find any pichers but i will right the bio now and then tell me what do you think abaut the faction
im thierd from overwork white my faction, just tell me what do you tink abaut it i will do more factions but not in this monte.
Note: Pantheres,Liones and Tigeres are animals but i remember thet i saw a picher white a half wuman and half lion and it was seid thet its a liones and set is a egipshin god of death.
and agein im sorry abaut my spelling.
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Daystar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Back from the Dead
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posted September 29, 2007 04:15 PM |
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Leonin, Liontaur.
Oh, and the Egyptian Goddess Bast was the Goddess of Sex, Drugs, and Rock and Roll. In case you want to work her in.
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How exactly is luck a skill?
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Lord_Evil
Famous Hero
Evil lolcat
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posted September 30, 2007 08:45 AM |
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I think it's a poo faction.
All those creatures are done before and it lacks originality.
this is my first faction what do you expect.
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Leonin, Liontaur.
Oh, and the Egyptian Goddess Bast was the Goddess of Sex, Drugs, and Rock and Roll. In case you want to work her in.
im not gona copy evryting from the real world like gods, think what will hapend if the griffin empaier whas beisd on jeases insted of the arch angels.
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Daystar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Back from the Dead
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posted September 30, 2007 03:19 PM |
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