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Adrius
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Undefeatable Hero
Stand and fight!
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posted January 09, 2008 05:18 PM |
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So here's the final part, hope you liked it, at least I did making it 
Part 4
“Show yourself!” Fandril screamed into the woods. His sworn enemy was there, he had heard him. Or was it just his mind playing tricks on him? Was he really going mad? Suddenly he was there, with that grim face without feelings.
“Here I am, have you been waiting?” He asked Fandril, talking to him like he was still a child.
“You can’t possibly know how much I’ve been waiting for this moment.” Fandril’s mind overflowed with painful memories and hatred. This was it; this was the moment he’d been waiting for. The Dark elf showed his blade, the same blade that had sliced his father’s throat all those years ago.
“Do you remember this blade? It remembers your father.” He laughed and once again he stopped when saw Fandril’s eyes. “You know, those eyes have always fascinated me, they look so… full of hatred. Maybe I’ll cut them out from your corpse when I’m done!” In that moment the battle began. Fandril blocked the first strike and retaliated. There was no opening in the Dark elf’s defence, but neither had his. Fandril attacked and aimed towards the Dark elf’s side who simply avoided the strike and cut Fandril’s arm. He screamed in pain and pressed his hand against the wound.
“If I’m not mistaken you’ve actually gotten slower since our last meeting, do you call that sword fighting? To believe that you elves are actually proud of your so called War dance makes me sick. You’re nothing compared to us.”
”Oh really? How come you live in caves then, hiding from all the people that hate you?” Fandril asked. He took of his hood and ripped off a part of it, using it as a bandage for his wound. “Actually your kind is even more disgusting than I thought, making dealing with demons… your kind should be eliminated.”
“Those demons will take over sooner or later, I don’t like them but I’d rather be on their side once they burn this world.”
“That’s just lack of courage, I actually expected more from you.” Fandril said and continued the fight. They fought for hours, neither of them winning or losing. Fandril had only managed to make a minor wound on the Dark elf’s left leg, nothing compared to the wound on his arm. His endurance seemed better than the Dark Elf’s however, who seemed pretty tired. He had to be at least fifty 50 years old. Fandril once again launched an attack, the Dark elf parried but was knocked back by Fandril’s strength.
“Its over, you have no strength left. Beg for mercy and I might consider sparing you.”
“Oh really? This is far from over!” The Dark elf said and raised his hand. Purple flames engulfed his hand, along with a strange sound. “Let me show you a trick I learned from our Sorceresses!” Suddenly dark thorns shot out from the ground below Fandril. They wrapped themselves around his legs, and he screamed as the thorns sank deep into his flesh.
“Hurts doesn’t it? I’m quite good at this spell.” The Dark elf raised his blade. Moments from death, Fandril sliced the thorns and dodged the attack. The Dark elf lost his balance, this was his chance. In a last desperate attack, Fandril stabbed his stomach. He screamed in pain, coughing blood. Fandril then pulled his blade out and kicked the Dark elf to the ground.
Fandril walked up to him, raised his blade and prepared to deal the final strike.
“You should have killed me all those years ago.” He said and pierced his heart with the tip of his blade. It was finally over. His heart was filled with a strange feeling, a feeling he had not felt since before his father was killed.
“Is this happiness?” He asked the gods. His feelings of complete success made him unaware of the increasing amount of Dark elves in the area. His life ended in irony, killed by the hundreds of revenge-thirsty cultists. His name was not forgotten however, despite the Circle of Druids attempts of framing him as a traitor of the law. The information that the elven woman provided however, led to so many demon cults destruction that the king ordered his name to be remembered. His name even travelled to the realm of the dwarves, where he was celebrated as a slayer of Dark elves. This radically improved the relationship between the elven and dwarven race and further raised his honour. His darker, more aggressive side was forgotten through the years and today, the Sylvan people celebrate him as the peace bringer.
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Daystar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Back from the Dead
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posted January 09, 2008 10:53 PM |
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Wow! That was an impressive peice of writing! Have you considered writing proffessionally? You've got some talent for a story.
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InfernoX880
Promising
Famous Hero
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posted January 09, 2008 11:59 PM |
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Before I being, here is the briefing: I am not considering myself to be any creature; the below story is from a third person point of view.
Defenders of Sylanna
Amongst the rustling leaves and precious trees of the ancient forest, the sound of an oncoming army could be heard in the distance. The present king of Elves, whom the Elves themselves have come to know as Galreth, walked among his troops, a pariah that would inspire them in this most difficult time.
Meanwhile, the two great seargents of darkness rode alongside their armies on the other side. The physically greater one was robust, massive, measuring the size of four men. For he was a Demon whose name was Dertharuth. The other rode alongside him on a horse, with a liesurely pace, and a Scythe in his hand. He was the most trusted of the greath Wraith Vorzain, anid his own name was Veldurin. Around them marhed the legions of an army consisting of Demons and undead creatures of all sorts.
Now the hordes of chaos approached a ridge, an ancient cliff covered with mosses. There the two lords halted, and their armies did likewise. Yet before any choice could be met as to how to best traverse this terrain, one of the greater demons, an Archdevil, they have come to call them, dropped dead, and arrow having pierced his entire body lay on the ground not two meters away from the dead body.
With this, the hordes became aware and began to scatter. Yet two more dropped dead under the same circumstance and more were yet to follow.
"Raise your weapons and find them!" screamed Dertharuth. So they did, Demons and zombies alike. But the Elves were difficult to find, for their cunning was not unlike their preception with the bow.
The Necromancer Veldurin simply sat atop his horse.
"Will you do nothing!" the Demon lord shouted. At this, Veldurin flicked his hand and the region around them was set ablaze, with the location of many elves being simultaneously spoiled.
"Do your master's bidding," Veldurin began, "and kill the Elves."
To be continued if someone supports me continuing it
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Adrius
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Stand and fight!
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posted January 10, 2008 11:33 AM |
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Edited by Adrius at 11:41, 14 Jan 2008.
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Wow! That was an impressive peice of writing! Have you considered writing proffessionally? You've got some talent for a story.
Thank you thank you thank you thank you...!
Infernox880: Nice, next part please
Come on! I want this thread to live! Release your inner feelings through writing people! Let your stories be read by us!
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Mytical
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
Chaos seeking Harmony
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posted January 14, 2008 11:53 AM |
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The hunger was all consuming, he had been too long in the presence of the Necromancers. Being in the company of the dead did not lend itself to feeding his never ending thirst for blood. He was with a legion of his brothers and sisters, all ancient and timeless. Tonight they would feast, harvesting new bodies and souls for the necromancers so more could join the ever growing army.
He could smell the pulse of fresh blood as he closed on his prey. Hundreds of peasants huddled together trying to find solice and protection in vast numbers. Before they could move the vampires were in their midst. He tore into one plump peasant, draining them of their lifes blood, but still thirsted for more.
The sound of battle faded around him, as the thumping of hearts grew louder as the peasants grew ever more fearful. Yes fleshling, he thought, Fear us. Your blood will be all the sweeter flavored with your fear. Soon your decaying body will serve the necromancers, who will keep some of you around to feed our never ending thirst.
The sound of hooves went unnoticed in his bloodlust. Just as he was feeding on another peasant a lance sprouted from his chest. More of his brothers and sisters fell to the Cavaliers charge. Only a few were left. As he burst into flames and turned to ash, he could only hope to be brought back by the Necromancers or his kin.
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Adrius
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Stand and fight!
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posted January 14, 2008 12:00 PM |
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Thank you Mytical, nice story
Inferno, will your story continue soon? Because i liked it. Even though I'm a bit sceptic too the Necromancer/demonlord team. Feels kind of wrong.
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Undead_Warrior
Known Hero
I hear voices in my head.
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posted January 14, 2008 01:28 PM |
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Mytical, Adrius, Daystar, Genie lord, guys you are way to good! I read all your stories and all are very beautiful. Adrius you should try to write professionaly. Serious. I will write a story too tomorrow.
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Undead_Warrior
Known Hero
I hear voices in my head.
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posted January 14, 2008 01:34 PM |
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Tomorrow I will post a story. [rhetoric]Guess what race.[/rhetoric]
we are waiting for your story.....
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I miss our castle...
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Adrius
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Stand and fight!
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posted January 15, 2008 10:43 AM |
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Edited by Adrius at 13:43, 15 Jan 2008.
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This really means much to me, thank you. When I have more time I'll write an other story, any suggestions on the race, place, time?
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Daystar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Back from the Dead
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posted January 15, 2008 01:15 PM |
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How about a Wizard student trying to pass finals and cover up a deadly secret?
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How exactly is luck a skill?
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Adrius
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Stand and fight!
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posted January 15, 2008 01:21 PM |
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That could work. A bit like Harry Potter
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Undead_Warrior
Known Hero
I hear voices in my head.
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posted January 17, 2008 10:44 AM |
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I was marching towards the vermin capital. I do not remember the name... It was a city full of abject light, and idiotic servants of the light. Pathetic scum! We arrived first in the town. The rest of the troops were not able to teleport. But here instead of peasants working and all kind of stupid creatures we found a war. The humans fighting Orcs. It was the best surprise ever. With a mighty battle cry I rushed into the thick of it evisceratind them with supreme pleasure. After a few minutes my lord and the rest of the troops arrived at the battle scene. In the noise of the battle I heard him screaming: IN TO THE CARNAGE! TAKE NO PRISONERS! SLAY THEM ALL!
Covered with the blood of my enemies I ripped the chest of a priest took his heart and eat it in front of my troops with savage pleasure. In the middle of the blodbath the earth cracked and legions of out troops emerged to enjoy the killing. When the battle ended, and after we killd or devoured the cowards that tryed to flee or surrender my lord himself desacreted the chapel and the altar and we burned the place to ashes.
There is nothing in this dimension I could enjoy most then the feeling of being in the middle of the blodbath and feeling the enemy shakeing in the convulsion of death lodged in the peak of my weapon.
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I miss our castle...
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Adrius
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Stand and fight!
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posted January 17, 2008 11:05 AM |
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Nice, I like the action 
My story is going to take while Im afraid. I have a project at school which I need to work on and another story to write.
Too bad my teachers probably don't allow H5 fanfictions 
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Undead_Warrior
Known Hero
I hear voices in my head.
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posted January 17, 2008 11:38 AM |
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Yeah, the teachers haven't played Heroes V yet and that's why they do not like this kind of fiction. Teachers are one of the most annoyng creatures from our race 
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Adrius
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Stand and fight!
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posted January 17, 2008 11:39 AM |
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Actually, teachers have their own race
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Undead_Warrior
Known Hero
I hear voices in my head.
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posted January 17, 2008 12:01 PM |
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Then I belive is our duty to destroy that race and make them our slaves. Maby even undead slaves...
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Daystar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Back from the Dead
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posted January 18, 2008 05:45 AM |
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I want to write another one, but I can't seem to get inspiration. Can someone give me a concept?
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Adrius
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Undefeatable Hero
Stand and fight!
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posted January 18, 2008 10:16 AM |
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Make a Naga story! Their story haven't been described to much so you can use your fantasy as much as you like!
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Daystar
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Back from the Dead
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posted January 18, 2008 01:12 PM |
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Omg, how did I not think of that!?? Thanks, I'll do it when i get home today (~8 Hours)
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Adrius
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Stand and fight!
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posted January 18, 2008 01:40 PM |
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I'm glad to help
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