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Celfious
Promising
Legendary Hero
From earth
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posted September 06, 2008 07:05 PM |
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Edited by Celfious at 19:06, 06 Sep 2008.
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Ashera I know you were beautiful but showing the whole pic is ... I dont know the word. Nice pic
Edit: Sweet, I got the flip twice!!!
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Celfious
Promising
Legendary Hero
From earth
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posted September 06, 2008 07:41 PM |
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Edited by Celfious at 20:39, 06 Sep 2008.
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Dont get any ideas peoplesss
Character Name. Celfious the Hunted
Race Diminutated Giant
Sex Male
Description Slightly larger and taller than the average beings of this world, with the exception of underground bred horned grunts. Celfious has a barbarian leather strap running from his left shoulder to his right side, which has harnesses for his secondary weapons. He wears clean black ratty shorts, black leather sandals, and 1 inch black hair. He is very muscular, and appears intimidating in all respects, though he is often kind and gentle with the ladies. And tolerant of males who do not oppose him. He was once inflicted with the mind controlling drug (see below) but found one who deemed him worthy of the cure (see below). Celfious is immune to the chemicals now, which is why he is the hunted, and the hunter. He was deemed worth not only by his size, but by his abnormal reaction to the chemical. It seems Celfious, resists it with all his might, which no average human has done, hence Artril the which doctor deemed Celfious worthy of the only cure there is, because the ingrediants are controlled in the labs of Enstilious
Setting- New fictional worlds. Many men of this world are scientists, under the order of Enstilious, a mad man who believes everyone should be injected with these metal penetrating seringes, which induce a mind controling drug, and feeds into the mind, the memories of Enstilious. So along with Grunts, who are naturaly chaotic and resist the chemical by having hardly a brain to control, bandits, with your average swords, whips, ect, and fricking scientists, there is Celfious. The only one who was at hell and back in the face of the world. In addition, the water is pink, because it too was contaminated with another scientific chemical, and it generaly maintains the initial drug, but it also induces new problems into the minds of uncontaminated drinkers. This, killed the giants. Before anyone knew of the contamination in the clean waters the Giants died. After time Celfious and others began to understand why. Giants have an opposite reaction to the chemical, but Celfious was not a giant anymore, Not completely. Lastly, the ones under this influence believe the scientists are the police figures of this world.
Background When and how Celfious became near average beings size, is a mystery to all. The giants dont recognize Celfious, nor do the humans. All celfious remembers is a dream he has never told anyone, with a rageing rejection to any request for him to do so. Only parts of the dream are known, and that is all the combat training, and chooseing to leave his normal life as a peaceful giant.
Skills Mastery in all forms of weapons fighting and 43 variations of melee combat and sword play. Proficiant in hunting, cooking, and leather making. Expert in firemaking, herbology (distinguishing poisions, ect) Hunting, and animal charm.
Abilities Intimidation, charisma, running faster than all beings, extreme body conditioning
GearBarbarian leather strap across shoulder to opposite side of waist, black ratty shorts, black sandals, in the strap are many weapons... not finished
I only do this to prepare for when I do finish.
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted September 06, 2008 07:56 PM |
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It seems people don't look at my Personal Page
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted September 06, 2008 07:58 PM |
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My mind is still thikning about it, but I ca, tell you my RPC can be found in Ashan.
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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antipaladin
Promising
Legendary Hero
of Ooohs and Aaahs
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posted September 06, 2008 08:25 PM |
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Character Name:Herbert 'Antipaladin' Delayle
Race: Half Humane,Half demon,half undead
Sex: Male
Description:
(immage will be added later)
Setting - Fantasy
Background:
Herbert Delayle was a young man from the Delalyle dinesty,although only remotely related to the Holy Griffin Empire,he showed impossible talents in the art of the sword and tactics after giving wins after wins in the front against the undead and the demons at early age of 16. He was recruited at early age due to a passion for fights,and using hes connection to climb high the latter.
after a few years and the empire began to crumble it seemed that he was betrayed,and captured by the demon lord Maragash. Maragash offered great deal of power,in return for aligence,after corruption in the captivity by the demons,Herbert accepted. He became whats called an inferomancer,a mortal who soled hes soul to the demons for great power.
He then oferthorewend Margesh and hes superiors and decided to receive a good aligment once again,and led a compeign against the undead. He however was mortally wounded in the struggle that led to the death of the great skeleton King,an undead leader in the north. the remaining of Herbert fallowers forced the necromancers guild into raising there fallen leader. After many spells ware used,the conjuration and necromancy aligned with demonic magic brought Herbert back as Antipaladin,Hes body changed much over the years,and he had become a powerfel entity,He then decided not to turn on the humans,but to rebuild the demon kingdom,he founded the city Kha-Seles,which a thousand years later herbert the infamous demon kha baleth. (kha means kingship, seles demon,and baleth fire in the tunge of demons).
They say that he is no longer a demon ,but a god of some sort,though no one had heard of seen of him in the last 600 years,heretics and cultist prohpetises hes return.
Skills:Grand Master in swords (may use 2 swords and block attacks with one ) and grandmaster in armor : may use any kind of armor to hes wish,can also summon demons
Abilitiesyromancy->use fire at hes will summon fire elemtanls,and burn enemys. half Undead,immune to any living affected spells.
Gear:Heavy Plate armor,Dual skull Long Sword,Great Axe
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types in obscure english
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted September 06, 2008 08:42 PM |
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Race: Half Humane,Half demon,half undead
How can you be Half three things?
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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 06, 2008 08:52 PM |
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he was half human and half demon, then he was turned into an undead.
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted September 06, 2008 08:54 PM |
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You didn't get my joke
He should be One Third Human, one third Demon and one third Undead
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DagothGares
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
No gods or kings
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posted September 06, 2008 09:37 PM |
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What if only his grandfather was a demon? What if he was like 25 percent demon and 75 percent human and then died and the got resurrected?
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If you have any more questions, go to Dagoth Cares.
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TheDeath
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
with serious business
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posted September 06, 2008 09:39 PM |
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Then he would be an Undead Quarter Demon, Three Quarters Human
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Adrius
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Stand and fight!
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posted September 06, 2008 09:42 PM |
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Hey Mytical... am I allowed to use Ashan as setting...? I know it's a little boring not to create your own world but I'm planning to create my own little part of Ashan, so to speak
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted September 06, 2008 10:16 PM |
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lol I'm in your story 
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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 06, 2008 10:19 PM |
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how could he otherwise be turned into a dark elf.
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DagothGares
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
No gods or kings
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posted September 06, 2008 10:20 PM |
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Being a dark elf is a choice?
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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 06, 2008 10:32 PM |
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He was an elf but The dark elf warlock (Asheera) used some magic on him so he became a dark elf.
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Why can't you save anybody?
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Lexxan
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Unimpressed by your logic
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posted September 06, 2008 10:45 PM |
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Edited by Lexxan at 22:41, 19 Sep 2008.
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Tales of the Dragon Knights
Vital Statistics
Picture: 
(The NPC Anomen from Baldur's Gate 2)
Character Name: Aurelion Ikonol
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Age: 21
Biography: Aurelion was born to Ruzonik and Zolika of the house of Ikonol(the first to guess where I got these names from, is cleared from all convictions in the courtroom), one of the most respected families in the Knighthood. Ruzonik was the Son of a Broken Monk, an initiate of the Blind Brotherhood and joined the Knighthood after his father's death. Hey became befriended with the Grandmaster, Sar-Sarib, but never liked Tibor much. He considered him too indulgant and impulsive. Zolika on the otherhand was a Sorceress. She was the daughter of a Mage and Specialised in Light Magic. She's a fervent believer in Elrath. She met Ruzonik when he was underway to the Dragon Knight Stronghold (their names are unspeakable for non-initiates, like me). They fell in love with eachother even before they reached their new abode. Ruzonik Converted from Asha to Elrath and they married. As the location or name of the Stronghold isn't allowed to be revealed to non-initiates, they held the Wedding in the Wizard City of Hadiwa, Zolika's hometown. Nine minths later, Aurelion was born. The Young Aurelion grew up to be a bright and Curious child, but one that was frightened quickly. Aurelions naivite caused him lots of trouble, but he endured and went on. He, in addition to his training as a Soldier, Studied the Lore of the Gods, Racial Studies, and History of Ashan, which is very rare amongst Dragon Knights. He persued and Learned with Great Passion, yet remained virtuous and loyal to his task, which made the Council pick Arkath and Elrath as his protectors. With the Training was Done, Aurelion is about to be accepted ion the Knighthood, though that day would turn out to be quite different that any other had expected...
Aligntement: Lawfull Good
Character: Determined, Helpfull, Honourable, Slightly Cowardly, Benevolent, Mercifull, Strong-hearted.
Physique: Tall, and Muscular; Short brown hair, Grey eyes, beginnings of a Beard. Scar on his Right Eyebrow
Skills: Ambidexterity, Expert Sword Fighter, Basics in Light and Fire Magic.
Abilities: Able to track Demons, Invole Elrath or Arkath, Quick Marchers, Great Memory, Practically immune to Charm or Intoxication
Weaponry: Two-Handed Sword (melee). The Pendant of Light and Fire (magical), Sling and Bullet (ranged),
Armour: Steel Ornamented Armour (prtective against Missiles, like Arrows and Bullets), no shield nor Helmet
Equipment: Apart from those Mentionned above, a Leather Purse, Stury Boiled Leather Greaves and a Backpack to keep his stuff.
Personal Motto: "Every Man has a Destiny to Fullfill."
About the World and Setting
World: Ashan, in 717 YSD
Setting: Fantasy
Quest name: Tales of the Dragon Knights
Quest History: My tale begins long before my Quest. It begins a the beginning of the present Era, when a Human called Sar-Elam, the First Wizard, Discovered the Concience of Asha, the Primordial Dragon of Order. Enlightened by his meeting with the Dragon, he became known as the "Seventh Dragon". Sar-Elam founded the city of Al-Safir, in the middle of the Southern Desert, a city that would become a Bulwark of Knowledge and Power, a city that would be known by everyone in Asha.
Sar-Elam was a great and benevolent ruler, loved by the people, respected by Magi, and feared by his enemies. For fourty years, the Southern Academy lived in Peace... or not?
At the same time, the world was being teared apart around them. Angles were fighting Facless, Elves were Fighting Dwarves, Humans were fighting Nagae. Behind all this mayhem lied the Cursed Kingdom of Sheogh, where the Demons lived, the Spawn of Urgash, the Evil Dragon of Chaos. Sar-Elam interviened and Sacreficed himself to end the bloodshed, His blood was luses as a seal to lock the Gates of Sheogh perpetually. The handfull of Followers, who had wintess the whole scene reported all of it back. The Gate was Sealed, and the Demons were trapped forever... or where they?
Sar-Elam's Blood, which provided the Key to the Gates, was suscepible to one things. Due to it's holy Enchantements, it was imperative that Asha or one of Her Children constantly shone on the Portal, to reassure it stayed close. Only one event could break the Dragon's Light, and Trun the Porta; to Darkness...If a lunar eclipse would happen above the city of Al-Safir, Sar-Elam's Magic would be temporarely dampened, enought to allow the Demons to unleash themselves.
In the Meantime there was strife amongst the followers of the Seventh Dragon, about how the Portal should be guarded. Sar-Antor and His followers thought that they should learn to understand the ways of the Gods and sacreficed their eyes to Sar-Elam. Sar-Badon was sceptical about Sar-Elam's spells, like Sar-Antor, but belive that only brute force could protect Asha versus the Demon hordes. The Majority of the Magi follow Sar-Shazzam, a very wise and powerfull mage, who believed that Knowledge should be gotten above anything else. He too knew that the Eclypses couldn't be delayed, but he knew something as well. He made the Prophecy of the Dark Messiah, and knew that resisting the Demons would be futile anyway.
The three factions continued arguing and, Sixty-Two years after the Revelation of the Seventh Dragon, Sar-Elam's followers split up. Ths event is known as the Shism these days. Sar-Elam founded the Silver Cites, a group of Wizarding cities, all build to represent Al-Safir. Sar-Antor and Sar-Badon left the Al-Safir and founded each an order of their own: the Blind Brothers and the Dragon Knights respectively. The Dragon Knights become a Martial Order that Guards the Demon Portals spread across Asha. The Blind Brother on the other hand, spread themselves across Asha, and become a group of Seers; some of them Join the Dragon Knight though and become, although Blind, a fighting Division in the Dragon Knight Order. My knighthood
Sar-Badon, our noble Founder died in 104 YSD at the fruitfull age of 124, barely 42 years after he founded the Order. It is said that he commanded the new Grandmaster, Sar-Kamar, to hide our Strongholds and abodes from the sight of the inhabitant of Asha. Whether this were true or not, Sar-Kamar reformed the order, making us a hidden order, a secret society, a myth... Our existance only proven by our fighting against the Demons during the First and Second Eclypse. Though we were hidden, and our existance was contested, we knew everything what had happened in Ahsa, due to our vast spying network. But two-hundred years later Disaster would strike over us...
It is in that time that I, as the son of a well-respected nobleman, was about to be accepted into the Knighthood. I and several other of my friends. We al were proud, we held out chins high, the Amulets and Jewerly and Fancy clothes we wore, shone in the sun, blinding the persons around us. We were accepted into the Knighthood. Sar-Sarib, the Grandmaster himself, Gave us the Symbol of the Knighthood, the Pendant of Balance. I remember looking at mine the pendant looked like a circle inwhich two Dragons were intertwined. Whoever joins the Knghthood get's these, each of them gives us the protection of tow Gods, chose by the Grandmaster or one of his Advisors. Each Pendant had a different Combination of Colours, the Colour of the Dragon Showing which Dragon protected the Bearer. Mine were White and Red, the Colour of Elrath and Arkath. "Could've been worse" I though. I and the other initates ate and drank, celebrating our initiation. I couldn't possibly imagine that that would be my last night in the city...
That night the third Lunar Eclypse happened, completely unexpected. Though a small Eclypse, a Band of powerfull Demon Lords managed to escape the Planar Prison. By this time they knew of our Order and where we dwelled. They hunted our Fortresses down... and slaughtered us almost every single one of us. Sar-Sarib, the Grandmaster was teleported to the Planar Prison himself, likely to undergo eternal torture and humiliation by the Sovereign and his minions. Only the Grandmaster's Son, Tibor managed to escape, with only a handfull of followers, Blind Brothers and Relics of Eight Dragons (We of course didn't have Relics of Urgash).
When they sounded the Alarm, I knew something horrible was about to happen. I noticed the Demon forces charging through the streets, incinerating, murdering, blaspheming, stealing, sacreledging, Destroying... evverything precious to me. I knew I couldn't do much, so I quickly Grabbed my sword, Pendant and Armour and ran to my Parents' bedroom. My father was gone. My mother was cramped in a corner, terryfied. She ordered me to flee, everyone would die if they didn't flee. seh said my father had gone to the Temple to secure the Artefacts, and that he told her to stay here. I asked to come with me, but she refused. She told me her life was over, and that the next generation was gone. Depsite the fact she wept, she said those words with intimidating determination. I accepted the fact that I would never see her again and left. How I managed to get away, I didn't know. I found a gap in the Wall and Slith through it unnoticed. Once I was through I ran for it. I ran and ran and ran... I don,'t remember how long I ran before I dared to look back.
I managed to get reach an oasis and decided to rest there, I stayed there all night, not daring to sleep... Eventually I felt asleep non theless, as a voice woke me up in the morning
"So it true, Garsh? They have managed to get the Artefact out of the Sanctuary?"
it was the voice of a Demon, so I silently sat up right. Since I was lying in a bush, the Demons could see me. It was a Demon who was conversating with a Demon Scout.
"Yes, Lord Hashech" the Scout said nervously "The Prince managed to flee with them eastwards My men are on them, watching them constantly"
"Excellent. Give me another Report in three days. I want to know where they're going, who they are and with which persons they have contact with. Infiltrate in their ranks."
"Yes , Lord Hashech" Garsh the Scout said and Dissappeared in the Bushes. The Demon Lord Walked to his Lizard, which he used as a mount. he climbed on it and rode away without looking back at the Oasis.
I have to act Quickly. If one of the Artefacts is Destroyed, the respective God won't be able to protect the Portal. I have to find Tibor and warn him. I will follow that Scout, who's heading East.
I have a destiny...
Quest: Find Tibor the heir of the Grandmaster. Secure the Artefacts. Find Garsh's Infiltrator. Makes sure Hashech doesn't find the Fleeing Dragon Knights. Defeat Hashech. Quest you should follow, in that order.
Other RPC (role-playing Character) Options: A Dragon Knight, a Follower of Tibor, a Demon Lord, one of Garsh's Scouts, Aurelion's Father, miscellaneous
NPCs (Non-Player Characters):Aurelion, Tibor, Hashech, Garsh and Garsh's Spy. (these Characters Will be played by me)
(Aurelion's Pendant)
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Coincidence? I think not!!!!
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Mytical
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
Chaos seeking Harmony
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posted September 07, 2008 12:43 AM |
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October 3rd is the deadline.
Wow that's a lot of time. I hope there won't be any extensions on top of this
No extensions. If your creation is not in by then, it will be too late. It's plenty of time. Though there maybe another similar contest at a later date.
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Message received.
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Mytical
Responsible
Undefeatable Hero
Chaos seeking Harmony
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posted September 07, 2008 09:04 AM |
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Hey Mytical... am I allowed to use Ashan as setting...? I know it's a little boring not to create your own world but I'm planning to create my own little part of Ashan, so to speak
Yep, by all means.
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Message received.
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carcity
Supreme Hero
Blind Sage
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posted September 07, 2008 07:19 PM |
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Uhm mytical I have a problem. What exactly should I write in skills and abilities?
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Asheera
Honorable
Undefeatable Hero
Elite Assassin
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posted September 07, 2008 10:42 PM |
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Whatever you want, for example, the ability to see in the dark, etc (since he's a dark elf)
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