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markkur
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Once upon a time
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posted May 26, 2016 02:09 PM |
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“Come with me to Faery”
Will you come with me to Faery
a land beyond the shores of men?
It’s a land where hearts are made merry
that wander awake through glade and glen.
Take my hand my wonderful Princess fair
and walk the golden branched path with me.
Forest havens of Birch and Oak are there
to rest our waterfall gasps of glee.
Pools of shimmering glass shine the way
for our two kindred hearts joined as one.
Wildflowers paint a beautiful meadow day
of nature’s beauty on our faces as we run.
Our Father loves to watch us play
in our handholding frolic and mirth.
Casting all our energy in this precious way
exploring the gardens of our Middle Earth.
Threatening storm clouds are on a distant shore
held at bay by the rays of Heaven’s dome.
The days of years melt away into forever more
when we take this adventure back home.
My heart wants you with me forever in this land
where my soul’s dream is not fancy but perfectly true.
So my princess wife hold my aging hand
on our paradise walk behind the brown and blue.
Markkur to his Princess, 2011
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"Do your own research"
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted May 26, 2016 03:13 PM |
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That right there is one of the most beautiful poems I've read 
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Ghost said:
Door knob resembles anus tap.
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fred79
Disgraceful
Undefeatable Hero
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posted May 26, 2016 04:00 PM |
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absolutely. i recommend it for a qp.
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted May 26, 2016 05:22 PM |
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Chronicle - The Fifth Fragment
In ways I have grown to understand
Partly on demand
How everything falls in place
How each of us needs some space
And I am thankful
For the lesson given
And I'm thankful
For the hate-driven
Individuals forced upon
My throat
To paint the world
In crimson's shade
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Ghost said:
Door knob resembles anus tap.
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Minion
Legendary Hero
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posted May 26, 2016 09:06 PM |
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NoobX said:
Ink on yellow paper
Makes all the difference
in the world
So empty
Like a shell sitting dry
On the hot
Sun bathed sand
NoobX is this really yours? It seems so different.. from the rest.
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"These friends probably started using condoms after having produced the most optimum amount of offsprings. Kudos to them for showing at least some restraint" - Tsar-ivor
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted May 26, 2016 11:49 PM |
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103.65%, yes, that's mine. I know it's different from the rest, but I came up with it in mere seconds and put it on paper right away.
I am... healing.
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Minion
Legendary Hero
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posted May 26, 2016 11:53 PM |
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Edited by Minion at 23:57, 26 May 2016.
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To me, most sound like "lyrics" to me. Like they would be really good in a song. But this.. is a poem the way I like them. Nice work
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"These friends probably started using condoms after having produced the most optimum amount of offsprings. Kudos to them for showing at least some restraint" - Tsar-ivor
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted June 06, 2016 10:21 PM |
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Chronicle - The Sixth Fragment
The tranquility wouldn't last long
For the color started fading
The lack of proper shading
Made visible before the strong
Hush
Was all I heard
And I sat in silence
But I yelled
And that's when I felt
It doesn't have to be like that
And I spread my wings like a bat
And I flew away, away...
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Ghost said:
Door knob resembles anus tap.
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted June 11, 2016 11:29 PM |
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Edited by NoobX at 23:36, 14 Jun 2016.
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Chronicle - The Seventh Fragment
The more it lasted
The more I was losing touch with reality
It seemed like a dream
I dreamed every time
Over and over and I couldn't bear it
Over and over and overboard
Into the black waters
Into the den of life cutters
Onto the blade of a sword
Over and over and overboard
My wings gave up as I plummeted down...
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Ghost said:
Door knob resembles anus tap.
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted June 16, 2016 11:13 PM |
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Fillers, please!
Chronicle - The Eighth Fragment
Risen from the depths
A shadow emerged
A shadow so dark
It swallowed the whole world
It swallowed the whole world
But there it was again
Beautiful and serene
Without me within
Without me within
Without the shadow
The shadow that swallowed
The world as we know it
The world as we know it
Holds no place for the shadows
Holds no place for the wicked
Those tortured by the guilt
Those tortured by the guilt
Of a thousand mistakes
That none of them committed
Not even in their thoughts
Not even in their thoughts
Has a trial been held
They've been hanged in front of all
In front of all to see the shame
And they're still hanging there to this day...
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Ghost said:
Door knob resembles anus tap.
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markkur
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Once upon a time
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posted August 14, 2016 11:29 AM |
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“Auction”
The rocking chair is still,
The users have departed.
Dog-eared pages in the books,
Yellowed upon the shelf.
Worthless things made priceless,
Cherished by these two lives.
Time worn paintings displayed on the grass,
Beauty was in the eyes of the beholders.
Whose faces reflected in these mirrors?
What joys and sorrows surround these things?
Decades of change thrashed against the breakers,
Aged uniqueness hung on in personality.
The precious vase or favorite tool,
Stand empty and silent, the owner has left.
We check in without and leave without.
Things adorned fall empty to the ground.
Lifetimes of prizes become bargains,
Two souls collections dispersed at the auction.
The real legacy remains in hearts left behind,
Holding the essence of the lives.
Markkur 1981
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"Do your own research"
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted August 20, 2016 11:34 PM |
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One Soul's Canvas
I stopped observing the drops as they fall
Little droplets forming ripples
On the surface of my canvas
I painted men and beasts
I painted claws and fists
And with closed eyes I admired my work
On my canvas there is no more space
Hidden behind the paint are the regrets
Shut off from the world I live in
Now the painting stands like a victor
Upon the grey pedestal of concrete
And now the painting wears off
I know what must be done
I set the painting ablaze
I watch as the regrets melt away
I watch and I'm amazed
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Ghost said:
Door knob resembles anus tap.
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted August 21, 2016 11:31 PM |
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Dome
Under this dome of words
Under the invisible sky
I placed my soul
To keep it from harm's way
Under this dome of words
Foundation colapses
Frequently the dome falls on me
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Ghost said:
Door knob resembles anus tap.
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted August 25, 2016 12:12 AM |
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Support
These times seemed to be breathing
I had the feeling they were living beings
Malicious creatures waiting for their turn
To put acid on my old burn
Denied and forfeited
I almost left the battlefield defeated
But scarred mortals the future have defied
I stayed and lived when I should've died
Back against thin air
I push away the monsters that haunt me
Gathering strength from voided past
Yet again I'll see tomorrow
Grateful for my only support
It makes everything worth fighting for
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Ghost said:
Door knob resembles anus tap.
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markkur
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Once upon a time
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posted August 25, 2016 06:23 PM |
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Fight till your fighter is fought out...and then some.
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Gravorce
Adventuring Hero
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posted September 12, 2016 03:39 PM |
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Edited by Gravorce at 15:41, 12 Sep 2016.
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Near me
When I sit on my own
When its quiet and still
When I'm feeling down
When I'm feeling ill
I hear your words
I know your thoughts
I see things clearly
You are still near me
When I look at my children
When I see their faces
They remind me of you
You remind me of places
My memories may fade
My senses grow weary
But even in the shade
You will always be near me
Gravorce
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markkur
Honorable
Legendary Hero
Once upon a time
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posted September 12, 2016 07:50 PM |
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Very good. I've had a few of those times too.
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted September 12, 2016 08:49 PM |
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Always great to see a new face in here 
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Gravorce
Adventuring Hero
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posted September 12, 2016 09:06 PM |
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Thanks guys  that was probably my first proper attempt at writing a poem 
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NoobX
Undefeatable Hero
Now, this is a paradox...
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posted September 12, 2016 09:38 PM |
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Don't sweat it. It all comes naturally at one point or another.
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Ghost said:
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