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william
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posted July 01, 2008 06:55 AM |
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First, I realized your music has interesting 'melodies' (the specific theme for a song) but the melody is usually repetitive.
Yes I understand that, but I have only been making this kind of music for a little while. I used to make 20+ minute improvisation songs all the time and I was used to using melodies that repeat over and over. I am still working on that. 
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What I suggest instead, is to take your inspiration from your three songs or more, and mix the melodies in a harmonic way
Nice idea but I don't know how I could do that. Right now my main inspiration has been the band, Depeche Mode. I don't know if you have heard them before but I am trying to do similar stuff to what they do.
Thanks for your comments.
By the way, I was wondering if anyone would perhaps want to try and make music with me. We could discuss over MSN or something and send the songs back and forth to each other and edit it how we please and see what we both think. If anyone is interested, feel free to HCM and I will give you my MSN or whatever you have.
BTW: Can a moderator please edit my first post by taking out everything and just say this instead of what it has now:
I make Electronic Music and I would like to share it with everybody here. I call myself Electric Disection for those who are interested. I hope you will enjoy listening to them
Hydroxide
Sadness
Hyperosis
Hyperosis Alternate Version
Infinity
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TheDeath
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posted July 01, 2008 03:18 PM |
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Yes I understand that, but I have only been making this kind of music for a little while. I used to make 20+ minute improvisation songs all the time and I was used to using melodies that repeat over and over. I am still working on that.
Don't feel bad because, for me, classical music is even more repetitive (note classical =/= orchestral soundtrack/score).
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Nice idea but I don't know how I could do that. Right now my main inspiration has been the band, Depeche Mode. I don't know if you have heard them before but I am trying to do similar stuff to what they do.
When I said inspiration from three songs, I meant three of your songs 
For example, let's say you have three similar ambience songs with different melodies, each 5 mins.
You can take melodies from the three of them, and generate a new 'melody' (similar to the three melodies) which will be more fluent and less repetitive (since you put them into one song). The final song will be very good even though it will be much shorter than the other 3 songs combined.
For me it'll be like quality over quantity
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william
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LummoxLewis
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posted August 13, 2008 11:43 AM |
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Edited by william at 12:13, 13 Aug 2008.
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If any of you are interested, I have a profile where some of my music is stored. Here is the link:
My Music Profile
If you want to try and help, you could register to the site and help write reviews about my songs and/or rank them.
Right now, I have the songs Leader, Sadness Part Two and Hydroxide uploaded. Feel free to make some comments here if you wish.
I am going to be uploading a new song quite shortly so stay tuned.
EDIT: Got both songs uploaded. hope you enjoy. They are called Experiment and cool Breeze.
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posted August 13, 2008 01:09 PM |
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'Cool Breeze'
After a brief 3,2,1,0 countdown in G-major, bust open your umbrellas and prepare for a memorable evening of smeared eyeliner and heartfelt emoting. This tame, syrupy number should have been called 'Oscar Night' or something similar. Upon finally regaining his composure, a tearful Jack McFarland gave the song a 10. So enjoy the music, but don't get too weepy. You gotta look stunning at the afterparty, you know.
-Guitarguy
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william
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posted August 22, 2008 03:51 PM |
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Okay, let's see if this works. I uploaded a lot of my recent stuff to mediafire. I hope that you will take the time to listen to the songs that you haven't heard before. Thanks.
My songs
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posted August 22, 2008 04:00 PM |
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Hey, William. I've told this through MSN already, but not in this thread (boy he(=me) would do anything to maintain a higher postcount that Ashie  ). Anyway. Good songs, like the sphere most of thm create (remind me of MoO2). Like Sun Dial and Hyperosis the most
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william
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LummoxLewis
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posted August 23, 2008 11:25 AM |
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Edited by william at 15:09, 14 Sep 2008.
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Thank you Lexxan for your kind words. I have uploaded 4 more songs onto my mediafire account so feel free to check them out.
Alright some news to tell. Me and Guitarguy started working on a song together and we finished it a little while ago. We decided to name ourselves Afterblaze. I will still call myself ED when I make songs on my own.
Here is the link to the new song.
Keeping it Casual
~~~Update~~~~
I have made a few songs today but I want to let you hear Against All Odds
If you hear it, please give me some kind of feedback. 
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posted September 14, 2008 03:11 PM |
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I have made a few songs today but I want to let you hear Against All Odds
Ok I listened to this before when you sent me the link in chat. My opinion is it's a very good song, kinda suitable for an action score in a movie perhaps (yeah I know I'm too soundtrack addicted but hey).
It is just slightly repetitive but much better than most others 
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posted September 14, 2008 03:22 PM |
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Nice song It has a nice "melody".
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william
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posted September 15, 2008 08:54 AM |
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Thanks for the comments you two. However, the file was deleted (somehow  ) and I had to reupload some of my songs. I just uploaded three of the songs that should have been uploaded.
Against All Odds
Rainy Days
Translucent Mirrors
Please try to give some feedback. It would be greatly appreciated. 
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Guitarguy
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posted September 17, 2008 10:05 AM |
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'Against All Odds' 8/10
This song doesn't sound anything like Phil Collins or Tupac! sounds mostly solid. Certain parts of the melody are very 'Horizon'-like. While some of the leads are strong, some others could go for additional ironing to make them stronger.
'Rainy Days' ~ 7.8/10
This song is sorta like a sedate version of 'Leader', redone and in a different key. Luckily, the midsection offers some extra elements that keep things from getting too repetitive.
'Translucent Mirrors' 7.5/10
This was, by far, the most experimental-sounding of the three songs. There are hints of creativity in the melody patterns, although it's probably at the expense of immediate appeal. So while it's a passable and original-sounding effort, it'll probably lag behind the other songs in terms of overall catchiness.
-Guitarguy
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william
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LummoxLewis
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posted September 19, 2008 05:25 PM |
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Edited by william at 15:37, 26 Sep 2008.
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Thanks for your comments, Guitarguy. Sorry for the late reply.  Has anybody else heard my songs? If you have, could you please at least comment in this thread if you liked them or not? It would be greatly appreciated.
I completed a few more songs in the last 24 hours so I am going to upload them tomorrow and update this thread.
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Well it has been a few days since I updated this thread and I have three new songs to show you all. Now PLEASE, if you listen to them PLEASE give some form of feedback.
Rocket Science
Fearing The Unknown
Loneliness
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Asheera
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posted September 26, 2008 03:53 PM |
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Well what can I say, I'm not a musician and thus not very experienced with music types, so I can only say my biased subjective opinion
They're mostly good, but Rocket Science is simply too "slow" for my taste (too low tempo, etc), Fearing the Unknown is better in that aspect but it's still a little repetitive IMO, Loneliness is my favorite from these 3, it's not repetitive (only a little) and not "slow" either.
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william
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posted September 26, 2008 03:59 PM |
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Edited by william at 20:39, 04 Oct 2008.
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Hehe thanks for your feedback. It is very much appreciated. I figured you may have liked Loneliness. That is my fav out of the ones there and the one that I think most people might like if they listen to them all.
Okay, I FINALLY made a song after a few weeks. Here it is. It is called Confusion
Please tell me what you think.
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Asheera
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posted October 04, 2008 08:59 PM |
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That's a nice and peaceful song
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posted October 04, 2008 11:37 PM |
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So far Ive only heard the youtube tracks and they are all at least 6/10
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Lexxan
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posted October 04, 2008 11:38 PM |
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<*whispers*> is too low Celf
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william
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LummoxLewis
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posted October 05, 2008 03:12 PM |
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My youtube ones aren't great at all. I'm thinking of deleting them and just uploading my tracks to mediafire or maybe making newer videos of my new stuff and deleting all the old stuff.
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william
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LummoxLewis
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posted October 14, 2008 06:13 AM |
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I'm wondering if a moderator was able to edit my first post and edit it and just include the newest links that I have. All the links in my first post have since been deleted.
Anyway, I have uploaded a few more songs that I have made recently. I hope you like them and please give me some feedback on them if you have heard the songs. Thanks.
Confusion
Ambient Soundscapes
Imaginary Boundries
Intrepid Minds
Morning Mist
I realise that the song 'Imaginary Boundries' is spelled wrong, but I can't be bothered re-uploading it with the correct spelling.
Enjoy and remember to please give some feedback. thanks.
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posted October 14, 2008 06:36 AM |
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I wish I had the skills and equipment.. I have the innovation though,
William can you make something that sounds hard, with bass, awsine drums, Some electronic sounds, ect?
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