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gnomes2169
gnomes2169


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Duke of the Glade
posted March 19, 2011 03:08 PM

Great Kuz! Welcome to the group!

Hope to see your fic up there soon.
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evinin
evinin


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posted March 19, 2011 04:09 PM

I'll try to do a narrative for Monday and I'll try to do something with Mark's and Peter's characters. Anyway, I'm really happy that you excepted my offer, welcome.
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PeterFarkas
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posted March 20, 2011 12:21 PM

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Sorry to hear that Peter. Hope good things follow.

I'm afraid I must end my part too. I'm in a difficult and intense battle with pain and am facing two different surgeries now. I've been slow to bow-out but I can see now that I am and "will be" very limited "energy-wise" and I have to learn to focus on stuff near to hand. Maps and my own personal story-writing. If I pen a thing it needs to be to my life-effort; a sequel to the Rings. I know, far-fetched but my head's there so I've zero choice. Wish me luck, blessings....whatever you call the "good-stuff".

Anyway, its been very fun and worth every effort.

You've all got wonderful talent!

God be with you in all things... to good ends

Peace, Markkur


Same wishes for you, Mark.
I truly hope you will be able finish what you have begun... even if you had done so much to HC already, and most of all that your surgeries will be successful.
Seems like healers don't have much good for this topic.

Still, best wishes and lots of hope and luck for everyone.

Have a nice day,
PF
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evinin
evinin


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posted March 22, 2011 02:54 PM

I have a bad week. Anyway - a question to everybody left - do you want me to make a final Fic for all?
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KuzAnn
KuzAnn


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posted March 22, 2011 03:35 PM

As in, a wrap-up written by you that ends the game?  

I think you should do what's most convenient for you.  =]

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evinin
evinin


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posted March 22, 2011 03:42 PM

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As in, a wrap-up written by you that ends the game?  

I think you should do what's most convenient for you.  =]


I don't do this alone you know. I can give a final narrative by the end of the week, wait for you to write and then finish the story.
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gnomes2169
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posted March 22, 2011 05:13 PM

Two more for me, please? I do have some things to do here...
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evinin
evinin


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posted March 24, 2011 12:07 PM

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Two more for me, please? I do have some things to do here...


Didn't I give you already? Check the previous page. I have very much things to do these days. Gnomes, if I'm not asking for much, can you write a short narrative for Isabel? You know - that she's missing or captured something like that that will fit with the previous parts. Thank you.
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gnomes2169
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posted March 24, 2011 12:30 PM
Edited by gnomes2169 at 12:31, 24 Mar 2011.

Isabel:
The Master looked at his prison. Hmm... I think that I need a new servant. One that's more... Reliable. He weaved the ether around him again. "Isabel... Come to me Isabel... I need you..."

Zehir:
Cyrus held up his hands to the cheering crowd, letting the wizards know that he was, in fact, alive, here and back in power. My master be damned! I am not going to give this up again. He thought. Markal's voice sounded in his head, WHAT?! You can't- Cyrus cut off the telekinetic link to his former ally.

I will watch you fall first, traitor. And then I must rally my people!

Raelag:
the owl leads him to some kind of temple. A shockingly familiar temple. A man's grave was there... He should never have come back.
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evinin
evinin


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posted March 28, 2011 12:12 AM

I promise to write something epic with dead-line the end of the week. Do you want the master to be revealed? And what are your plans? Are you going to write something soon?
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gnomes2169
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posted March 28, 2011 12:14 AM

I'm obviously corrupting dear sweet Findan with Demon taint. Nothing more beyond that... Just wait for it evinin.
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evinin
evinin


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posted March 30, 2011 06:22 PM
Edited by evinin at 18:24, 30 Mar 2011.

The hooded man sat on the table in the left corner of the pub. He ordered nothing more than a water and waited about half a hour for the other one to come. The face of the Dark elf was even paler that usual and he was looking at all sides while crossing the room. He sat on the chair against the Wizard and immediately started talking.

"I feared that they sent Assassins after me. Things are not going well, Zehir, not going well at all. My own people are against me. My old enemies are rising. There are words of Biara's return. I know nothing of Isabel. What should I do? Should I become a demon again? Why are you so silent?" The Dark elf really didn't sound like himself. Something was really wrong.

"I'm not sure if you are the real Raelag. How can you prove it?" Zehir looked at him with a cold stare.

"You're right... But I have no time. I can't even think of something with which I can prove to you who I am. Isn't there a way to get your powers back?" The Wizard still didn't trust him but he answered.

"I'm working on it. No one noticed my missing - there are all gathered around my father. They think that he will save them from Markal's wrath. I'm not sure about that. Word came that Heresh has fallen into his hands. An ally of his - the vampire Giovanni - tricked their high lord Arantir and took his place. No one knows what happened to Arantir but they say that his right hand, Ornella, must be dead. It doesn't sound good, does it?"

"No, no it doesn't. And nobody know what happened to Ylaya. I can't get trough this mess without her. If you hear something - please tell me. I'll start looking in the East parts of the Empire - something wrong is going on there. By the way - any words from the orcs?"

"I tried to contact Gotai and Kujin but my tries quickly failed. Looks like the revived Alaric has destroyed many of the orc's tribes and their khan is said to be dead. I can't say for sure but Kujin is also gone. Something global is going on, Raelag, and it's too late to stop it. We can just wait until it destroys us, too." The Dark elf looked at him with surprise.

"How could you say that? We are not giving up. We can still save things. When I was underground I was told that..."

"I'm sorry to interrupt you but I can't fight alongside you - not this time. I have no powers - nor magical, nor political. We can exchange information and nothing more - I don't know how to..."

His next words never got out of his mouth. On the simple wooden table that separated Zehir from Raelag suddenly appeared burned words.

KILL YOUR FATHER

Raelag looked at Zehir but didn't say a word. He stood up and left the pub. The Wizard payed his water and also left. It was raining outside but he could smell the fire of rebirth. He didn't know what to trust, he didn't know in what to believe but he knew that he had no choice.


Edit: Well, I hope you like it. It is a nice scene in my opinion.
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gnomes2169
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posted March 30, 2011 11:12 PM

When the phoenix lady returned to the table, many of the heroes had finished both their stories and their food. Findan was just wrapping up his. "... and so, we came here searching for Armageddon's blade."

"To destroy this... Markal?" Tarnum asked, amused. The elves all nodded their agreement. He chuckled slightly under his breath. "Alright. Fine. I have no love for this... Creature." he spat out the last word. "But there is someone far more powerful that the blade Must be used on. And there will be some restrictions..."

The heroes talked excitedly amongst themselves. "What kind of restrictions?" Findan asked.

In a monotone, almost disinterested voice, Tarnum listed all of the restrictions off. "One, only the person that I give the blade to may use it. Two, if at any time said person is to die, I take the blade back. Three, if the Phoenix lady or her master is to hold the blade, I will purge your world of all life." Tarnum glared at her as he said this point. "Four, when you are done using it, the blade returns to me. Agreed." He stated this like a fact.

Findan nodded, "Agreed."

Almost absently, Tarnum said, "Then catch." and tossed the blade at Findan's chest. It stopped inches in front of him and a sheath materialized around it. Findan took the massive blade and slung it over his shoulder, barely able to keep it from touching the ground.

"You'd better get going." Tarnum told them. "Allot has happened since you came here."

the heroes looked at each other, confused. "And how long have we been here?" Lethos asked.

"A week since you entered my palace." All the heroes blanched a little bit at this. "Time is a fickle mistress. Here's what happened while you were gone. Raelag and Zehir met with each other, but weren't able to change anything. Ylaya is still in the protective folds of her goddess. The necromancers have fallen completely. The elves are more hard pressed. The orc society is completely torn apart. Lethos, your daughter just had her fifth birthday." The blood and what color he had drained from the dark elf's face. "Yes, I did, in fact, know everything we talked about. And much, much more. But I'm not allowed to mess with fate anymore than I have already, so shoo." A portal opened up that led to a mountain chain. "I'm dropping you off a week's travel from Markal's stronghold. Happy hunting!" The heroes filed out one by one.

The Phoenix lady stayed behind.

"I know why you are here, fallen savior." Tarnum whispered. "you cannot kill me for very long."

"As long as I and my master need." She replied.

"Do you know how many worlds will fall because of this one act? How may people destroyed? how many lives lost because of this? My power is spread thinly because I'm helping other worlds, directly, with monsters bigger than your "Great and powerful master." If you kill me, I lose the power to manifest myself and these worlds die." Tarnum gazed at her critically. "Can you live with that?"

She answered by blasting him with a bolt of incredible power that shattered his physical form. The hall seemed to sigh, "I thought you were better than this." The phoenix lady gasped from exhaustion. I haven't used that much power since... Then she realized that she hadn't actually used all of her power in one shot. Well, now I guess. And then she felt a shudder in the natural order of things pulse through the portal.

The Phoenix lady felt the poison coursing through her veins react to it, and she cursed the day that the Sovereign had been created.



Nebros and his small army of demons had burst through a portal before anyone had time to react. The heroes had soon found themselves hard pressed while they tried to fight back, until Findan drew Armageddon's blade. He seemed to change, grow, but stay the same as well. The blade burned at his touch, and for him, the world stopped. Others just saw him moving faster than anything they had seen before, cutting down everything in his path. He reached Nebros, and then his, apparently temporary, speed boost suddenly vanished. The Demon Lord swatted him into the ground with ease and rammed a demon forged spear into his shoulder.

Findan writhed in pain as the demon poison quickly spread through his system, scarring his body and soul, changing them both to suit the Sovereign's will. Nebros reached down to take the elf-king when the Phoenix lady tore him apart, crying out in fear and rage.

Instantly, the demons pulled back. Many of them dying in their panicked retreat.

"Findan!" Wyngaal cried out, trying to run towards his friend when he hit a solid barrier. "What... Natasha! Damn you, let me get to him!"

She ignored his protests and whispered to Findan, "There is only one way to save you, only one way to stay alive..."

"I want my life." He replied.

A flash of green blinded the others for a few seconds, and when it faded away, Findan hopped up, almost un-recognizable. His left hand was the claw of a demon, one eye was silver and unfocused. Findan was pale and looked almost in pain in the sunlight. He held out his hand and Armageddon's blade came back to him.

"Let's go then." He hissed. "Markal needs killing."

The new vampire-demon-elf led the company straight towards Markal's palace. The phoenix lady thought, Another slave to my suffering... Is this worth it? No god cared enough to answer her.
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evinin
evinin


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Servant of Asha
posted March 31, 2011 03:04 AM
Edited by evinin at 03:09, 31 Mar 2011.

Bonus Fic (big reveal time)

"What have you done??? How could you do it? I HATE YOU!!! You promised, you stupid ungrateful Wizard! You PROMISED!" The Phoenix Lady was shouting in rage. She was walking nervously in her cave, hitting the walls madly. "Why did you curse Findan, how could you curse Findan..."

"Shut up, servant! I didn't do anything! If you had done your job this would never happen! If Raelag killed the Sovereign he wouldn't still be a threat, don't you think? Except this as a punishment." She started pulling her hairs in her madness. She fell on the ground still feeling weaker from the big energy use. "It's not enough to have two of them here - we need all for the ritual or I won't be revived. And you won't be cured... We still need Findan so you have to get him back to normal! I'll give you the cure formula but you can use it only once." The Phoenix Lady looked at the sphere with wet eyes.

"So this is what your doing... You are giving me the opportunity to save my selfish life or Findan's... Ok, ok, ok... We'll see what will happen, master... Any other orders?"

"Make sure Zehir kill his father and then bring that wizard to me. I have big plans for him - after all, I'll need another body." The Phoenix Lady gasped in shock. "You didn't think that I'll revive myself as a dragon, right? I'm not that stupid. You beloved Zehir will be my new body. We are Wizards, aren't we?"

The Phoenix Lady left the cave. She walked a couple of meters and then sat in the swamp and started crying.

Edit: Kuz, you can write something about Isabel now if you want.
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KuzAnn
KuzAnn


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posted March 31, 2011 03:15 AM
Edited by KuzAnn at 03:19, 31 Mar 2011.

Wait wait wait.  Are we supposed to take this as meaning that Sar-Elam is the bad guy?  8O  If so then my mind = blown!  I did not see that coming!

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evinin


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posted March 31, 2011 03:41 AM

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Wait wait wait.  Are we supposed to take this as meaning that Sar-Elam is the bad guy?  8O  If so then my mind = blown!  I did not see that coming!


Yep, he's the bad guy. Though he's not that bad - he only wants to live again. More will be said in the next Fics and so.
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KuzAnn
KuzAnn


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posted March 31, 2011 03:46 AM

I can't wait to see what happens next!  ='D

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evinin
evinin


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posted March 31, 2011 03:47 AM

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I can't wait to see what happens next!  ='D


So... Are you going to write a Fic about Isabel?
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KuzAnn
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posted March 31, 2011 03:54 AM

I can still try.  I felt like I didn't have enough info and didn't want to rush in and mess things up for you guys by writing something that wouldn't work for the story.  =[

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evinin


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posted March 31, 2011 03:59 AM

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I can still try.  I felt like I didn't have enough info and didn't want to rush in and mess things up for you guys by writing something that wouldn't work for the story.  =[


Oh, don't worry about that, Kuz! Write what you like, that's the point of everything. Your story will fit by itself, don't worry. If you want involve Raelag, too. You've read the other Fics so you have to know that everybody writes with his style and write his ideas.
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